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@whalekeeper yes! It’d be great to have some characters who have bias’ meet Grimm and Paxton.

Grimm would not like them and Paxton would be afraid of them.

@freedomwriter76

u could put…Hitchens back in…. 😳😳

@esther-c exactly. Can’t be mad at the chosen though because it’s just the truth probably! In reality, Jesus loved him even. It’s heartbreaking.

I loved Judas even before the chosen so it really breaks my heart. I wish he could’ve found forgiveness in the end before he…you know

@freedomwriter76

November

“Ah, yea, I-I’m good…” November pulled a leg up to his chest, staring ahead. He looked over at Iris and then at Eli, who was napping. He smiled. “Your kids are cute.”

“Thanks,” Riker grinned. He looked over at Paxton, tilting his head. “So is he. Hey, hope ya don’t mind my asking, but…what’s up with the colored thread…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon

Grimm

Grimm raised his head, listening carefully. He held a hand out, his other hand held to his lips, signaling silence.

The footsteps grew louder until a small shadow appeared.

It was a lad, a few years older then Paxton, wearing…a very simple tunic, with a rope for a belt. His hair was a bit unruly, f…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

well, I believe you have to look at it from this viewpoint-

Not every villain has to be, nor needs to be redeemed, but every villain has had a glimmer of good in them at some point.

Because villains are not born, they are made.

Imo no one is born coherently evil, and so sometime as a child, or while growing up their hea…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Interesting question, and I can definitely see where you’re coming from. I think we want to teach our readers something through all our characters, not the least being the villains. Because of this we often want our reader to sympathize with the villain a little, but this isn’t always what’s needed. It depends on what role your…[Read more]

@booksbyjayna

Cool! I’m working on my second book (totally different structure/feel than the other ones I’m working on) It has a hero reaching rock bottom moment too, still working out the kinks (as in I haven’t even started outlining XD)

@esther-c

XDXD yeah I don’t like slow teaching either. That’s why online works well for me 😉

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 u on?

Also I think it’s ur turn freedom to RP at the castle

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 THAT CONFLICT IS SO AWESOME!!!

ok we need more conflict like that in the other groups….. that’s what needs to happen somehow but idk how…guess we really need to think of it like a story, kinda forget our preconceived character ideas and really think “How would they interact?” Including flirting, etc.

@freedomwriter76

Rae

“Well, Dassie, whatcha think?”

Hadassah smiled sweetly, clasping her hands in front of her. Rae grabbed one of her arms, pulling her around in a circle playfully. The younger girl laughed, coming to a stop with her spinning.

“Guess the others got separated from us, huh? That or they left us…”

Hadassah pursed her lips, clu…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 WAIT!!! I never saw that reply for Aaron and bren!!! CRISIS AVERTED!!! Ok my bad y’all confusion has happened 😂

Aaron

“Really?” Bren looked up with wide eyes at Lily.

“Ah…thank you, but we couldn’t ask you to do that.”

“It’s no problem, really,” Lily insisted, smiling at Aaron. He bit his lip, brows furrowing.

The que…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ok! Have fun!

You play violin, right? Is that what you meant by band, or is there another instrument you play?

I play clarinet, I only did band for one year. Yeah, it’s so much easier to play in a group. I dropped it for a bit after switching schools, but lol I loved it too much and couldn’t live w/out it. XD So yeah I have a pretty…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 😭 ok…I’ll make reply RPs now then 😊 just bear with me for a few mins

Also yea they can meet up with Alex and Madeline.

im not so upset about the last RP being lost as much as the Aaron and bren RP

@freedomwriter76

….I made a reply to that RP…

and apparently it never went thru 😭

Are you subscribe or have the emails for this?? I’m wondering if maybe somehow it still sent the emails for them…

I LOST MY RP 😭

@esther-c

Hey! Not much really. Just sitting around and waiting until we have to leave for choir.

Fun fun! I did band because I’ve never been much of a singer. XD

Lol. In a broader sense, I am procrastinating on editing my draft. XD And trying to come up with a story to write for my mom for her birthday. (Which I am not succeeding at right now…

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@esther-c

Hello! What are you up too?