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@savannah_grace2009

Oh glory. Dad.

Thay was a little bit of a gutwrench. Beautiful. Really beautiful.

Thank you for sharing. I’m going to screenshot this and save it to my phone, if that’s okay.

@theducktator

the coat sounds cool! My favorite coat is a vintage blazer I got thrifting

@savannah_grace2009

That’s beautiful!

Loved

That word really does change everything.

Croissants 🥐 

Onnendel loves them. They remind him of a breakfast food he ate often as a kid. He will get very sad if one goes stale and mutter nostalgic nonsense as he toasts it.

Dwogin doesn’t really like them. They’re too fluffy and don’t have enough substance to them. Flattens his to show how much of it is just air bubbles. Ridicules…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

He is indeed! That’s lovely.

@power Yes! And when they “win their spurs” they can say it’s for “Brilliant KeePers”.

Um… This is a good question. I relate to all your answers, lol.

I guess that I could embrace childlike wonder without losing depth to my story, that I needed mentorship but didn’t have to accept every idea, and that daydreaming is not the same as writing.

Wait. Not sure I actually know that last one yet. XD But really, that there are many ways…[Read more]

@stacey-weyenberg

We have waited so long for a welcome post to comment on….. A Bumbling Henchman to ask random questions…. We apologize if the welcome committee is a little over-zealous, but we’re so excited you’re here!

So, so excited.

I just messaged the newbie.

*salutes*

@theducktator

COOL. Is it vintage or reconstructioned/repatterned? What type of wool?

@esther-c

I think it sounds fine. You mention it being ‘not that bad of a sin’ but I don’t think it would be a bad thing to write even if it were worse, it’s a path many people go down and it’s good to show that people can turn around and find a new life even if they get deep in to something or enjoy it. Some thing I would note is that is…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks! It was really fun to experiment with.

@grcr

They look great! That’s an impressive project. I hope it turns out well!

@ellette-giselle

WhAt??? Wacky theology? Really??? *Utter sarcasm*

Ugh yes. The Angel stuff is just…weird. and then there’s Drew’s senses things and the red light expirement…*shakes head in mild derision*

@ellette-giselle

Wow. Yup, Green Beret. He did die in the Middle East, but I don’t think it specified a place or operation.

@ellette-giselle

That sounds a lot like Cloak of Light.

@esther-c

XD Well good! Glad it was helpful. Don’t worry too much over the whole “Gracious but this draft needs so much work” problem. You’ve already put in a ton of work and learned so much just to get to this point in the drafting process. You can do this! It’s worth it. (plus, hey, we’re all in this thing too…writer’s are crazy)

Just goes to…

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And I would like to throw in something that might be totally unrelated to what you’re dealing with, but it was a bit of a shock to me and had me seriously rethinking how I address certain topics in my books.

(Warning. Mentions of suicide.)

In my recent Psychology class we discussed aproaches to suicide awareness, and the results were mildly…[Read more]

@esther-c

This is a very good question.

But I suppose it comes down to what the reader sees is going on and what the character sees–and those don’t have to be the same. In this case, shouldn’t be.

I’m in the middle of rereading Screwtape Letters. One of the letters tells about how that sin has pleasure attached, and how that pleasure actually…[Read more]

Yay! okay, y’all. Expect to see another instalment by the end of the week.