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@overcomer

My style…I’m not really sure where it has come from, except that almost all the poetry I’ve read was written before the 1940’s.

The meter here is roughly 7-8 syllables with a pause of cadence in the middle of each line. The rhythm is One and TWO and Three and FOUR. I hope that helps and isn’t more confusing.

Ah, slant rhyme. I have…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

That was soo good! I didn’t cry lol, but I could feel my eyes getting hot 😂

Does it seem boring?

Nope! Almost, but I was mostly engaged.

How is the pace?

It’s good for the scene, it feels a little slow but it’s not a action scene so that’s to be expected.

Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?

Aw yess… I a…[Read more]

@livingwoodchronicles

Hmm…true, true.

How do I sign up?

Random interjection of verse!!!!

Just a girl with big dreams and a heart full of Going,

Hands for the harvest and tales for the Sowing,

Awaiting her story but even then knowing-

That fields laid to follow are still part of Growing.

@livingwoodchronicles

This looks amazingly! I would love to join in, although…

My writing isn’t the very great yet, (but my sister who is reading over my shoulder just said it wasn’t bad either). I do write clean, the prose is just bumpy. I’d love to try though.

@esther-c

of course! 🙂

@rae

I’m not sure what to call my style, besides being metered and rhymed. I don’t know a whole lot about poetry, besides a few basic rules.

Hmm, thanks for ideas and feedback!

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you! It’s one of my best so far.

Hey y’all, I and my sister will be on off and on for the next couple of days (especially tomorrow), so that could potentially add 2 to your numbers.

@esther-c

Huh, I’ve never really thought of it that way before, but I think that’s the aspect of their relationship that I play off of in the second book to create more conflict. Man, I am going to be pondering over this all day. XD

XD glad I could make you think! It might be a good source of conflict for book 2, but I think it would be great if…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m still not getting notified when you tag me 😭

anyways they looks super cute together!

@loopylin

Wow those hands look amazing!!

@savannah_grace2009

1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.

Nope! Super intriguing!

2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?

Very relatable!

3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make so…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks for giving specific question, it really helps!

Answering as if I’ve never heard your writing before XD

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

I was confused as to why the story had so much action before a exposition. It felt like information overload on many things, and I couldn’t tell what was important. Should, I think…[Read more]

@acancello

Woah!! I’m so proud of you!! Good luck on your edits! 💖💖🎉🎉

@acancello

Wait, what’s this about you writing your epilogue?! Did you finish something big?

@esther-c

Thank you so much Esther! I’ve been doubting my writing recently and really comparing myself to others, so it makes me happy you like it. I started writing in present tense as soon as I started writing, so after the initial hurdle (it was hard lol, I kept using said) it’s been pretty natural, because I don’t know how write any other…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @loopylin @whalekeeper

Ok this is kinda long, if it looks familiar it’s a complete redo of a scene I posted awhile ago 🙂

I’m at exactly 24k now… progress is slow but going alright.

For those of you who don’t know, Aleshia is Lesli’s new boss but also the mother of her best friend, Tauren, so she grew up…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’ll show you if I ever finish it lol!

Wow, 35 pages? You go girl!!

Also, love the scene. Erich is really interesting…

Btw I’m not getting notifs for anything you tag me in 🙄 if there’s something you want me to see and you think I missed it feel free to let me know in a update!

@smiley

Oh thank you soooo much 😭😭 I’m so glad it’s not the ross I like

@loopylin

Oh wow, you parents being grandparents is weird O_O

Nicknames is great, I need to listen to it again, so glad you like it! Oh, I like run the world too.

I’ll have to check that one out, I haven’t listened to much TOP other than their really big hits.

Yeah! Totally recommend it, along with a big dose of caution. BTS is a pretty safe…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I know, I know XD I want to write, and I have an idea for a scene I want to write today for Leon/Riker’s 3rd book🤫

Oh, really?! Cool! Tag me if you post it pls! Also, I haven’t been getting notifs for some of your posts, so if I don’t respond that might be it. 🙁

Thanks! XD

Oh, yes, draw bucky! I’m currently working on a Mav…[Read more]