Mallory O'Bier

@winter-rose @jane-maree Ok, done with editing that chapter. 🙂

@Winter-Rose @Daeus *poofs in* I know, I’m never here at this time. But technically I’m critique reading at the moment. And doing a bit of songwriting as well. (Shhhh it’s not past midnight yet xD)

Till about 10, if I had to guess.

@winter-rose I’m beta reading.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 well I’m here now. XD *folds hands primly**ahem* You had a question?

@That_writer_girl_99 *jumps in late AGAIN to respond to something that happened four pages ago* Yup, Sarcastic Elf. That’s me. Summed up and wrapped in glittery perfection in two incredibly awesome words. *bows*

@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD

Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! How about you make mention that Jack had woken Daniel up or something? Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD

Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering which brother is the MC.

“Thieves?”
“No.” It couldn’t be that. The…

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@ethryndal *laughs* Touché!

@perfectfifths *falls off chair and chokes laughing* I’m an elf, okay? This Galaxy stuff is beyond me.

@ethryndal It sounds like a little six-year-old Padawan with a lithp! 😀

@Dragon-snapper The only writing contest I ever knew about was Patrick Henry College’s “A Call to Pens”, but they’re not doing it this year, so…sorry. I know I’m not helpful.

@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks for the tag!

@Lady_Erin Yeah, sorry, I’m one of the few weird people here whose username doesn’t match their profile name. =P If you go to someone’s profile by clicking their name, you’ll be able to see what their username is. It takes a bit, but you’ll get used to who has different username/profile name combinations…[Read more]

*snickers* I am one with the 4th, the 4th is with me. May the 4th be with you all!!!

@anne-of-lothlorien Western Australia 😀 We’re at least 12 hours ahead of the U.S. depending on the timezone and stuff.

@dragon-snapper May the 4th be with you, too, but for me, it is now Revenge of the 5th 😀

Well, first of at, @dragon-snapper, I have to warn you, you have tagged one of the most picky proof-readers/editors I know – me! So, yeah, it’s only because I want to help make your work the bestistest you can make it. Forewarning, now for some edits 😉

“Daniel!” My brother, Jack exclaimed, just as perplexed. Make the ;m’ in ‘my’ lowercase – tha…[Read more]

Well, first of at, @dragon-snapper, I have to warn you, you have tagged one of the most picky proof-readers/editors I know – me! So, yeah, it’s only because I want to help make your work the bestistest you can make it. Forewarning, now for some edits 😉

“Daniel!” My brother, Jack exclaimed, just as perplexed. Make the ;m’ in ‘my’ lowercase – tha…[Read more]

Happy Star Wars day, everyone! May the 4th be with you!
@perfectfifths @daeus @kate-flournoy @all of the star wars fans!