@overcomer
Active 9 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Daeus replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses Ah, yes. That is what I was trying to get to.
All of this is perfectly doable, but you need to approach it from the right mindset.
What you need to understand is the difference between a wish and a goal. A goal is proactive. A wish is passive.
A wish is like this: “I really don’t want to talk to anyone on the phone.” *cries…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses Hi! So glad you could join our Kingdom! Jesus, forests, writing, family—looks like we have a lot in common. 🙂
What are some of your favorite books? (Note how merciful I am by not making you choose one. 😉 ) What genre do you primarily write in?
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses I agree. I tend to have to learn things myself before I get them. *sigh*
That’s a neat insight. I need to read 1 Peter again.
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Daeus replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses I’m a strong believer that a skilled writer can make almost anything exciting. You do need conflict to create an interesting story, but conflict doesn’t have to be what you might think it is. Conflict is not actually the same as people fighting (verbally or physically). I’ve encountered plenty of physical or other forms of…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
What are you studying in the bible right now?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter-Rose poor guy… *hugs him* Seriously though, you did great. First person pov is not one of my strong points and can be very easy to do typically, but you did great with it. Thanks for sharing. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus yep. 590 words, so I’m pretty happy. 🙂 Thanks yourself.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy I’m stopping now. Got two chapters edited. Thanks for writing. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy Sweet.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus writing now. I’ll be going until two o clock.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea Mayhaps I should say I’m sorry…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus about to be. I’ll tag you when I start.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy Are you writing now?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
*screams*
@Ethryndal aaauuuuggghhhh!!! I’m dying! *chokes on her laughter and topples over off her chair and goes into spasms on the floor*PERFECT. Absolutely perfect.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal Wow; I’m getting major “Russian author” vibes from that sketch, so it’s really hard for me to complain about having that look! 😛 Probably the closest to Dostoevsky I’ll ever get. 😉
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien You peaked my interest.
@Aratrea I’m sorry. 😀I present to you…Josiah the Wiser!

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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Anna-of-Lothlorien You peaked my interest.
@Aratrea I’m sorry. 😀I present to you…Josiah the Wiser!

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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl *maniacal laugh* Mwahahaha!
No…actually, I think that would just be horrible to myself, because I know what’s going to happen. I haven’t even gotten your village yet. Not yet…but soon. After I get past these butterflies. *grrr*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 could you give me the link to the doc again? Mine is doing weird things.
That sounds like a great solution. Good job. I notice you’re thinking in wider perspectives now— purposefully using the interactions to develop or manipulate. *wiggles eyebrows* Excellent work, my young padawan. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien lol. Either one or both. They sound good.
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