Mallory O'Bier

@anne-of-lothlorien I second everything @adry_grace has said. (How come these people are so good at voicing my exact opinion?) I love the ending. LOVE. And the present tense is good too. 🙂

@anne-of-lothlorien I really like the present tense in this. *waits for random answer*

@winter-rose Signing off. Got one chapter edited and some grammatical stuff fixed. Thanks for writing. 🙂

@winter-rose Great.

@dragon-snapper @ethryndal @winter-rose @graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99 I’ll be writing for about a half an hour if anyone wants to join.

@Aratrea lol

@kate-flournoy That’s why it’s only going to be a temporary thing. 😛

All right @That_Writer_Girl_99 read through the document, and left a comment in one place, but otherwise you did good. 😀 You’re handling Matthias with more subtlety. *thumbs up*

Have you figured out your plot problems? Any way I can help you?

@BethanySinkyRoses welcome aboard, new KeePer! 😀 Look forward to seeing you around.

(@aratrea I hope you know that profile picture makes you impossible to take seriously. XD)

@anne-of-lothlorien *groans miserably and winces* Agh, I’m sorry, I have to leave for homeschool co-op in fifteen minutes, and there’s no way I can draw something that fast. *headdesk* I’m sorry. 🙁

@delightinlife Sure, I’ll beta-read it. Just make sure you start a separate thread for it, and don’t post it here. Otherwise, it might get lost among all the writerly ramblings. 🙂

@gideon-sowdon @dragon-snapper Oops. Um…I plead artistic license. 😀

@anne-of-lothlorien Challenge excepted.

@gideon-sowdon Aye, he did.

@Winter-Rose okay cool! *waves* See you in the future. 🙂

@That_Writer_Girl_99 no, you’re doing and have done great. Just last I checked you were having problems with the plot, and that’s the one thing that really hangs me up when I struggle with that.
*cough* I suppose you can ignore that bit of advice then. 😉

@That_Writer_Girl_99 quick tip: look at your different character motivations. Each character is the hero of his or her own story. What are they aiming for? What is it they want? Kara’s not going to be the only one moving the plot. Each person’s life is an entire story. You chose to tell those stories through Kara’s eyes, but they’re still separate…[Read more]

@GracieGirl Yes, that’s what I had in mind.

@GracieGirl @Daeus I guess it could just be my personal experience with some of the WordPress blogs I follow that could be spurring my dislike, because I definitely agree that they can work well. If you know what you’re doing and you use everything properly. I think the main thing is that I’ve found the comments difficult to reply to, and…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *waves and offers pizza*