Mallory O'Bier

Farewell @Aislinn-mollisong

@Catwing okay, see you!! *salutes*

@catwing I did a little editing. The first is your original, and the second is my edit version. Your version is a bit wordy and passive, with rather long sentences. Shorter sentence portrays tension and danger. Hope it helps. 🙂

You Were Called By The King
Jack, Alex, Cele, John, Chase, and Amelia are not normal. Even before they met a mysterious…[Read more]

@allison-grace We all are. 😀

I think everyone makes great points about Luke as a character. And @salome01w4g I also like Han Solo.

@Dragon-Snapper Okay byeee. See you in the future. 😀

@catwing @jane-maree I’m signing out now. I wrote 1085 and edited almost a chapter. Byeee!!!
*and then I shall makes some collages. Yessss..*

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@catwing Ew. Please cough. Just cough. Be human just this once.

@Emma-Flournoy @Mariposa Thanks! And yess, I picked the name Rosso because of her hair. 😛

Byeee @DaughteroftheKing!

@catwing *hands you cough medicine*

@catwing Yessssssss.

@Kate-Flournoy thanks! They’re pretty fun characters as far as I’ve brainstormed of them at this stage.

@Catwing Aw thank you. ^-^ The girl (Megan) is actually a ninja, and Dylan doesn’t have powers either. It’s a superhero story…but the two main characters aren’t actually superheroes. It’s still in the brainstorming stage currently, and I’ve…[Read more]

@catwing I am writing a scene which launches everything exciting about this novel! Villains with character arcs! Ah ha! Ah ha!

@jane-maree Going pretty good. The writing is interesting. It’s…first draft.

@Catwing (sorry, I didn’t see yours before) I’m working on the second book in my dystopian trilogy. Agent Kit. 🙂

@DaughterOfTheKing Heyo. *waves* 😛

@Dragon-Snapper HELLOOOO. *hands you some pizza* How’s it going?

@Aislinn-Mollisong I have never used Canva, but @Hope has had a very good experience with it, so yes. That could be another option.

@jane-maree HIIII!!!

@Jane-Maree I want to meet them. 😀