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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Of course, sorry if I come off as a know it all when I point anything out. My own worldbuilding is also very incomplete, and I agree on the list thing. Maybe I should start posting some chapters of my WIP sometime, though it gets a little creepy at parts, but it would be nice to have a nice set of critiques as well.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
That’s true, but side would be very hard for them to keep balanced, unless they were double sided, or just super small. Then once again, there’s the neck issue. If they never developed much for military, living in peace with one another as well as with the other races, then it would make sense that they don’t really develop their…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Ok, I suppose that makes a little more sense for the Felisaro, though even with that, this is going to be a major hindrance to their development as a race in comparison to the others as @keilah-h mentioned, but there is a lot of interesting dynamics you could get into with that if you wanted. Using short range weapons still seems…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, that would make for some interesting history! Btw, @kyronthearcanin , do the Arcanin also use their mouths, or do they use some other method, like their magic?
@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just brainstorming, I guess.
Yep XD
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Would anyone like some fresh questions to ponder?
Who has tasted protons before?
What do protons taste like?
When did you taste said protons?
Where did you taste said protons?
Why did you taste said protons?
How did you taste said protons?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Right, yeah that would make sense, but don’t the Arcanin also walk on all fours? As their known as the kind you don’t want to recon with, being seen as by far the most powerful of all of them?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks! The issue with that though is it seems already pretty well established that the Felisaro somehow get around this, and are quite advanced. Unless they did take longer to advance, or maybe even piggy backed of from some of the others, but even that would come with a wide set of difficulties, going back again to…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Ok, I’m so sorry for not responding to this after so long, I just now was able to get around to reading it. It’s really good! I like the cast of characters you got going, and you really seem to be building up on the idea of whether or not Quelin is friend or foe, is that going to turn into a major theme or arc?
A few…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic feeling ashamed of your writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I’m sorry! I can understand why this would be difficult and frustrating. I haven’t finished a book, but go through this all the time with the ones I’m currently writing. Looking at past scenes that I feel I could have written so much better and that I feel now don’t fit at all with the rest of the book.
But I believe this is natural,…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
@mineralizedwritings IT LOOKS SO GOOD!!! I love the fade and softness of the whole thing!! It gives a really cool vibe
And yeah totally get that relief when you just finally finished it XD it is so nice
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The long and tedious character naming process… in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh, not at all. I was just thinking that it would make sense that his name as a whole maintained the same roots, so I stuck with Indian origin. It could be intentionally not of the same origin, representing a foreign evil that took root in him, although that sounds like it would become more of a cultural commentary, which I’m…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Did you know only one of the 56 founding fathers was a member of the clergy?
(Nup, but it makes sense to me, as too many would likely lead religion to become too politically involved.)
(Also in addition Jefferson was a very interesting person religiously speaking and just in general. As his beliefs are a bit complicated I’m just g…
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys interesting question here what do you think of this statement?
If democracy represents the collective conscious of those who can vote then would it not be the fault of the Christians that the collective conscious is been trending away from Christianity for the past 50 years? And thusly it would…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I will admit that the end of that is unseriously adapted from a crash course video
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
for finding the validity of news sources I find these sights helpful
KP only let me post one link per a post (I don’t know why)
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
for finding the validity of news sources I find these sights helpful
https://www.allsides.com/unbiased-balanced-news
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Did you know only one of the 56 founding fathers was a member of the clergy?
(Also in addition Jefferson was a very interesting person religiously speaking and just in general. As his beliefs are a bit complicated I’m just going to say to read this…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
“As for Jesus of Nazareth, my Opinion of whom you particularly desire, I think the system of Morals and his Religion as he left them to us, the best the World ever saw, or is likely to see; but I apprehend it has received various corrupting Changes, and I have, with most of the present Dissenters in England, some Doubts to h…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(Hey sorry for not getting back to you sooner! I was in bed sick and my brain was certainly not in the mood for deep discussions in question form! I’m feeling much better now, so we’ll see how this goes.)
(No worries! I’m glad your feeling better!!!)
(Geometry is definitely a puzzle piece to reality. (love the pun there.)) Do not all p…
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom
Those were great RPs!! I’ll try to do Namal and Phervin sometime soon
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