Orielle2023

@arcaneaxiom

HMMM

Outlaws of Time by N.D. Wilson – not only is it a good book (but I’m biased I really like it XD) I think it does a good job with the ‘magic’ system. Would recommend. =D

My fantasy/mystery story doesn’t necessarily have magic but I’d assume superpowers would fall under this so… yeah. I don’t normally focus on the magic system…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yay! Glad you like them. XD
Yeah, humor always has to have a part in my stories…otherwise they get too dark for my tastes. So that probably comes across in their interactions. XD Plus the fact that I love portraying siblings and basically unrelated siblings relationships. XD

@whalekeeper

XD That first one XD I struggle not to do that.

@freedomwriter76

Anyone can go next!

Thank lol. He doesn’t like it when people are like WoW yOuR GeTtInG sO tAlL

and then he’s actually proud of it 🤣

@loopylin

Thanks! : D

@keilah-h @loopylin @princesachronicle22

Layson looks up as Serin severs the beast with a final blow. Adrenaline pumps through his viens, making his head feel heavy. Serin collapses to the side. Layson runs one hand through his hair, then looks down in disgust at his bloody forearm. He clenches his teeth as the fresh scrapes from the creatures…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! I’m the same, I like learning by myself so online works great.

@thearcaneaxiom

yeah… I hate proofs XDXD

I have literally no idea! XD I just remember when she couldn’t find somebody to watch my sis and I so we sat in the back of the classroom doing sticker gems lol. The students looked so big and scary 😬 Oh and her college had cool chairs to spin in. That was kinda all that mattered to me at the time so…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Honestly so glad you guys like it too 🤣 hopefully my future readers feel the same XD

@freedomwriter76

lol I can’t even remember where you had that scene with Riker because I read it in my email…

but I love it! I mean I assume he’s got some more obstacles…

Him getting dizzy… so sad!! But the whole scene was great XD

@godlyfantasy12

HMMMM

I think I understand what you’re saying but I’m not exactly sure so bear with me. XD

Sooo…

Do you know the scientific naming classification (can’t think of the name) we have in real life for creatures? That might help some.
Other than that I’d say like within the species of shifters there would be sub-groups for what…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you so much!!! ❤️❤️❤️

You’re welcome! =D

Lol…sorry about that, but I’m afraid I do not have a solution!!! 😂😂😂

XD Riker remains highschool/college age for life XD Oh well.

@godlyfantasy12

Ok so I don’t know a whole lot about this in terms of worldbuilding…

but that being said from a birdwatchers perspective you have a new species when they are too genetically different to interbreed. Sometimes there are certain color differences (or perhaps behavior) depending on the region, to the extent most bird guides will…[Read more]

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise

Thanks guys! Glad you all think it’s sweet 😀

And yes, Jonathan is like one of the most respectable charries I have XD

@thercaneaxiom

Sorry, but proofs are the bane of my existence XDXD

Because I never got a chance to understand the basics of what they are built off of, I tend to think of them as the one question I’ll get wrong on the quiz.. but I still get an 80% and it’s only five points, so yeah I don’t bother LOL. Just the way it works these days I guess……[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

AWWW Poor Everly and Kaine!!! But they’re so sweet together XD

*my respect for Jonathan goes up*

@freedomwriter76

OOOOOO I REEEEALLY LIKE FIN XD

*totally didn’t just read through his backstory and then read the snippet of yours*

I like it.

XD I have a problem. I can’t stop seeing Riker as a teenager after the school AU XD I’ve tried imagining him as an adult but it isn’t working XD

I don’t really have any other comments on characters or…[Read more]

@lightoverdaaarkness6

Thanks!!

XDXD yeah, I don’t write about there height difference a lot so I don’t think anyone really knew about it lol

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks! I’m so glad you liked it! And that it almost made you cry XD My job is well done lol

@freedomwriter76

XD Luca likes mushrooms so much and I’m not sure why yet XD

Aw, you’re welcome! ❤️