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@godlyfantasy12

Hmmm okay I can see that, makes more sense

(Btw this is just my opinion, so with a grain of salt pleeze 😊)

Obviously there’s going to be some people who just want power, and it makes sense for them to make a big deal out of the snakeAra thing.

I would say tho that yeah, she WAS just a child, it’s easy to understand she…[Read more]

@smiley

Heh so I don’t know like a ton about marvel, but yeah Falon is definitely my favorite XD

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, and be sure to show how the people are being negatively affected through actions, not just dialogue. Give examples, in some of the charries’ lives, of why the people feel this way.

@esther-c

No probs, you’ll do great!!

@godlyfantasy12

Oki-dokie I love trying to help with these XD

The first question that comes to mind, is, why are the people resentful of the royal family? Why are they low-key rebelling?

There should be a clear, important reason – that requires action.

I can see the whole ‘royalty’s just a symbol’ being…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh that’s awesome!! I love piano 😄

Ahh you read the kid ones too!! I read those a few years ago and then again recently. They’re so good!! You should totally read the adult ones!!

And yeah!! They’re all amazing authors — if you’re going to read their stuff, start with skyward by Brandon Sanderson and fawkes by nadine brandes. 😉 Ted…[Read more]

@acancello

Nice!! 😁 Yep it does

I love making up rules!! 😅

@freedomwriter76

Vaguely xD The one who rescues him from an almost fight I think?? Awesome! you’ll have to tag me if you post about it

@dekreel

Thanks!! 😄

@esther-c

Nice to meet you Esther!! Thanks 😊

Yess, another violin player ! xD

1. Two years in September! Hbu?

2. Haha, yes I could name thirty😂 the hunger games, lunar chronicles,…[Read more]

@solfyre Yep, that’s me!! 😁

Yes you should!! And yay!! Can’t wait xD

@hybridlore

A fellow pantser!!! XD

Yeah, I write cliffhangers a lot, but also I can’t stop reading when I get to a cliffhanger, so… I’ll have to try that series again lol.

I’m working on Chapter 8, and have been for a few days but I’ve been kind of stuck at the ending. So you know, I’ll probably have it done at some point XD

@esther-c

Okay, when I first read that paragraph about Malyk dying, I thought you mean EVERTON was going to die, and I was really sad because I love what I’ve read about him…. (totally not stalking him or anything, lol)

But you didn’t, so we’re good. 😅😁

Aaaanyway, yes, I totally get it. I struggled with killing off any of my charries for a…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’d say, first off the bat, that killing off a character doesn’t automatically make a book better. If you are going to kill off someone, it’s important to have a specific reason – to highlight the power of the villain, finish an arc, make a thematic point – instead of doing it just because you feel like it’ll make things better. I would…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Awesome! Well I guess he already has something a little different about him, then, so that worked out! 😁

@loopylin @keilah-h @esther-c

Eclipse

Azar was itching to follow after Ridley. Eclipse could feel it. At least that would get us away from everyone else, he thought.

Azar let out a nearly imperceptible sigh, glancing around. But then we’d miss all the fun here, he replied. Honestly, there are too many decisions.

Maybe it’d be easier if you…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Hi!! *waves, then hugs back*

You’re welcome! 😄 It was awesome!! You’re a really good writer and I’m super excited to read whatever you write next!

😅 And 180+ pages is amazing!! Congratulations!! 🎉

Thanks!! 😆

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Calvin

Calvin nodded, with a slow, comforting smile. “Totally fine. I guess I get pretty scary when I’ve been up for forty-eight hours straight.”

Then, to Wolfgang – “Sorry about Marcel, too. He won’t apologize when he’s grumpy.”

@freedom

Arrgh, I know! I had to do this same thing a while back, and grr it’s so frustrating because sometimes it just has to be done… I mean, tropes became tropes because everyone thought they were a good idea, sooo…. There must be something there, right? XD

Anyway, I’ve got a few random thoughts (this might not be helpful because I have…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

😉 Nah, he likes kids

@freedomwriter76

How many charries are you killing?? Bc they need donuts and hugs more than anything else honestly…