OrangeArmadillo

@rae

Hugo

“Oof.” Hugo wrinkled his nose again, and scowled. “I don’t do strict.”

Nar sighed dramatically. “Well… if that’s how it is…”

“Okay, I’m just kidding.” Hugo couldn’t play the serious part for more than a minute before breaking out in a smile, made of dazzling sunshine. It was just impossible. “All those traditions and rituals sound s…[Read more]

@loopylin

No no no –

You don’t understand. They are officially my character, by order of KP signature. See signature, please.

@trailblazer Aww!!! 🥰 Yeah, I’m team Albert and Libbie.

@freedomwriter76

I love how you draw eyes! I can’t really pull off anime eyes for some reason… XD

@loopylin

AaaAAaaHhhh my children

MY children

@loopylin

Those two children of yours are the cutest, I just wanna give Lois a hug…

@rae

Hugo

“Heeey, I’ve got it! Okay – watch this -”

Hugo tried again, this time by himself. He made it almost to the end, but slipped up, and finished with a goofy swing freestyle. His feet tapped rhythmically as he tilted his head to one side, grinnin…[Read more]

@rae

Hugo

Nar had all the elegance of a nightclub performer back home.

When she finished, Hugo clapped his hands together. “Flexible and agile are my two middle names, sister. Okay, you start like this, right?…”

He wasn’t a perfect learner. Only one step at an time. Unlike his rascal brother, who could picture a hundred moves ahead in his min…[Read more]

@rae

Your smile is one.

*squeaks uncharacteristically*

Hugo

“If you aren’t horribly offended, I’ll just call you Miss Nar, please.”

He had never met someone truly familiar with an emperor-run system before. However, an emperor was more or less a dictator, which wasn’t too far from his own world. He hoped her world wasn’t consumed by organized m…[Read more]

@rae

Hugo

Hugo half-hissed, half-laughed, “I’m sure whatever you just said was a good thing, Miss Nar.”

He had practically forgotten his manners in this modern world. For the first time that night, two spots of red glowed on his cheeks.

@savannah_grace2009

That sounds good, I’m glad you were able to get a clear answer from God! I agree, I think it still definitely works even without the shorter beginning. And even if it does turn some readers away, it’s going to touch the people God wants it to. 🙂

@loopylin

You got thissssss XDXD I’m on Christmas break and am going nOwhEre so, behold.

@rae

…Everyone does stupid stuff XD BUT I would not call you stupid. You have an innocent track record on here, and that would be unnecessarily villainous of me.

It’s official, Nar has a crush on Hugo already.

OH MYYy that’s so sweet of her!

I just hope he…[Read more]

Me when I can barely walk at school, my classmates ask what’s wrong, and I have to tell them I stretched my muscles too much trying to learn the Charleston:

Babs

“Oh Baaaaaaabs…” The Vinlin’s warm, boyish face turned to her, streaked with dark curls. He tied his coat around his waist and held out his hands. “Come on!”

Babs fussed with her clothes and hair one moment too long, and he pulled her onto the dance floor.

With a squeak, she tried her very best – but what was she supposed to focus on? H…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Of course! Sorry, I think my last post lagged. I really like your idea of doing the flashback and then going to Lilitu’s pov, though!

@grcr @savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I did notice that! Maybe Lilitu’s chapter could come after Sef’s?

@sara

Definitely! I hope you figure it out!

@savannah_grace2009

Hey! I think the first one does a great job of pulling the reader in more, but the second one also has some great writing in it.

I know the chapter with Sef and her mom really means a lot to you, and it does a good job of setting up the backstory of Sef’s parents and a little bit of world building. So really they both work in…[Read more]

@loopylin

Dante needs someone to dance with!! *glares* He can’t just stand there the whole time. He needs someone to at the very least annoy him.

@rae

Aww, thx, he loves making people happy, it makes him happy 😊

Hugo

The dance was so simple, Hugo could do it with his eyes closed. And he did. Holding Nar’s hands gently, he glided through the steps, and tilted his head up with a blissful smile.

When Nar did a funny spin under one arm, the slender boy laughed and gave her another twirl. H…[Read more]

@everyone

…I’m just going to answer my own question and start the practice 😅😊

@rae

Hugo

“Why should you apologize? Look at that,” Hugo beamed. He rolled down his sleeve and spun his arm like a pinwheel.

Nar slung her satchel around to her opposite shoulder. Her face flushed faintly with confidence.

Hugo looked at her again, checked himself…[Read more]

@everyone do Y’all want me to intro the teachers? Get the practice moving?