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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
To be honest, I kind of guessed she was going to be a prostitute, so Julian’s reaction seemed a little much (especially to seeing her bare shoulder or whatever lol.) But then I reminded myself that it was different back then, so it made sense.
I would like to see her become a bigger part of the story, unless that doesn’t wor…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I’ve tried. I think she enjoys tormenting us 😂
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle
Ohhhh, okay. Wow, that is a longgg book. XD -
hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh, okay. Out of how many pages total?
And are these Word/Docs pages, or like actual book pages?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Augghhhhh.
Wow, this book felt way shorter than the second one. Is that the case, or was it just me?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Out of curiosity, how far are we through the book by now?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Please tell me you’re not really going to kill him off.
Also, if Albee is the one to tell him, then we don’t get to see what happens. 🙁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Really know your characters and try to build conflict between them naturally. (There’s probably lots of articles about that, maybe some even on here.) The better you know and understand your characters, the easier writing will feel, especially if you don’t have a super clear plot and are more just following the events of a certain time…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
Hey, I’m a chosen one now! When did that happen?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
*sputters* Then how is Ian ever going to become a Christian? Leon won’t be there to explain it to him, and he probably hasn’t even listened the whole time!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Could you survive in your story's universe? If not, why? If so, how? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Ooh, great question, @whalekeeper!
My main WIP right now . . . yes, since it’s essentially our world, just in the near future. Although, it will get a little harder as time progresses and the government begins to persecute Christians.
As for my other project, Eidar . . . As long as I had the right equipment. Like Loopy’s world, there are a LOT…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
ELLETTE. You can not leave me like that. Leon can’t die now!
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Silencing KP in your inbox is so much work. XD *Unsubscribes* *Unsubscribes* *Unsubscribes*
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Enid posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
Hey guys, I will be off KP for the next couple months (at least) due to graduation and the complications of life. I will pop in every week to update Topic of the Week and roleplay, but otherwise, I won’t be on as often. Tag me for anything I need to see.
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Enid replied to the topic DnD QNA in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
If we do this, we’ll have to wait until my school year is over (around the first half of May). Graduation. 🤷♀️
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Also, back to the memes, the Maverick one is so accurate
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Ah, okay. We can say Marcel is just standing between them to diffuse the tension.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
*Dies* *Tries not to wake up my fam* I love em
In-story, little Hugo steals rare spices because he wants to learn to make fancy pastries and tea leaves. 🤣🤣
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Enid started the topic Could you survive in your story's universe? If not, why? If so, how? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Could you survive in your story’s universe? If not, why? If so, how?
I thought this might be a fun question for everyone! (Since the last question was so serious.)
In Lovedream, this depends on luck and my own charisma. I might fit in very easily with the culture and the trade. At first, I need lodging and a job in one of the corner restaurants.…[Read more] -
Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge @theductator 😂
Marcel
Before Mateo could pick up the panic-stricken boy by his scruff again, Marcel quickly shifted the skeleton spirit’s hand into his own – finally shaking it. He stepped in between Mateo and the boy. “We all freely go to Foreign Culture.”
Hugo
“That shouldn’t be a problem.” Hugo…[Read more]
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