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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
He and Alec are my favorite.
I hope one of them dies in the end.
Why am I not surprised loll
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*Slips in* I’ve also met somebody who looks like one of your Hallie faceclaims. 😅 First moodboard, left, with the long red hair. It’s crazy how similar they look. I’ve had this thought since you started using the photo, but never thought to tell you for some reason.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka
Two new chapters this week! They should be uploaded to the doc now. Excited to hear what y’all think!
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whaley started the topic What are some interesting things you've learned through story research? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 1 month ago
What are some interesting things you’ve learned through story research?
I feel like there’s always something interesting in a writer’s search history. Very often, this includes creative character deaths, so if you’d like to share… XD Well, I’ll go first.First off. I’ve been researching the origins of the electric guitar (because I have a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I just got the cabbage stuck on the stove so we can eat in a few minutes.
*Snorts* XD
I’ll hang around here for a bit, mainly to think up a new TotW (Topic of the Week). I have a few other things to work on, like researching synth music, the earth’s atmosphere, etc. all for my projects. I’m waaay to concerned with…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 1 month ago
I’d be open to creating our own community. Slack would probably work for me, I’d have to check with my parents about Discord since I don’t have it yet. There’s also Group Me… which I don’t know much about, but plenty of youth groups seem to use it for announcements (not sure if you can create mini channels or anything like that.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Yep! I noticed that! 😆 “Teacher.” I like it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I love the way you put us inside Rolf’s story instead of having him just tell it. It worked so much better. Also, the transitions were great.
Good section. The part about Conrad was sad, though. I don’t really have any big critiques. Great job!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
It looks good! I don’t have any major critiques. It is a very short chapter, but it does a good job of building on the tension. Also, I like the way you described the trees.
It seems a little weird that Olivia and Adeline and Dylan don’t seem to care about their families… well, maybe Dylan a little bit.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Ohhhhh nooooooo! Ellette! I’m so sorry! That’s terrible!
I’m glad LOS was okay… but I’m really sorry about your WIP. That’s terrible.
I use Word Online (microsoft365.com, I think…) to write, and it saves online so I can access it through my phone and other devices. That might be worth looking into for the future, since I’m pre…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed Love it!!
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I was just thinking about making pana cotta! Never tried to make it before, but I had it a few days ago and enjoyed it.
Although I might swap out the rosewater for orange or lavender.
You can totally do that. Just decide what flavor combo with the spices is best in your opinion.
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago

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whaley replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*Sighs* *Flips hair dramatically* I have answered your irrelevant interview questions. It’s too bad I’m behind bars, or I would set your printing press on fire. And not in a good way.
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whaley replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Hm. I have a couple characters who go through the same thing. One has a few days, the other has a suspicion of their own death and only becomes sure of it in the last few hours.
I think it depends on how much of a communicator they are, and what kind of legacy they want to leave behind.
Character A might tell his friends immediately (or not long…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I suffer from dessert-making mania. Here, for you.
Rice Kheer Recipe
– 3/4 cup basmati rice
– 1 Tbsp butter
– 1 tsp ground cardamom
– 1 tsp ground nutmeg
– 10 cups whole milk
– 1/4 cup cornstarch
– 2 cups heavy whipping cream
– 3/4 cup sugar (or to taste)
– 4 tsp rose water (optional)
1. Rinse the rice until water turns clear, then soak…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Wait… what? What happened to the parts you couldn’t recover?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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