OrangeArmadillo

@grcr

Ohh, gotcha! It’s a fantasy race, then?

@acancello

That’s good! Yeah, I feel like I should try that, too. I wouldn’t say my characters are all super introverted, but generally they’re more quiet than loud, unless I’m just trying to have them say something to move the plot forward.

Oh, that’s awesome! I like characters like that too XD Yeah, I think I get what you mean.

I’ve never…[Read more]

Brown eyes can be really pretty! I feel like I’ve maybe overused them a bit, though, because I think it’s realistic to have characters with them since they’re most common. Oh, and I forgot about hazel. I think I’ve used that one before too.

@grcr

Personality-wise, my characters have all sorts of different traits… I’m an INTP, but I try to make my characters different myself,

Hey, awesome! We’re twins xD

That’s really interesting! I don’t know if I’ve honestly tried to write from the perspectives of extroverted characters before … I guess I struggle with character development a lit…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Nice XD I mean, they’re aliens, it’s okay lol.

Exactly, it’s hard XD Cause that one word works so well there, but you’ve already used it 🤦

@hybridlore

Yeah XDXD Although I’ve had alien-like people with blue hair, too lol

Oh definitely, I see it all the time. I think that’s why it bothers me so much XD

@kyronthearcanin

Ohhh, gotcha, it was dyed xD.

Oh man, I think all writers must xD Or just everyone in general. Sometimes I’ll be reading and I’m like, wait, didn’t they just use that word in the last paragraph? Maybe our brains can only hold so many words at one time so we just end up using the same ones to describe things XD

@hybridlore

Yeah, haha, she was a runaway. Her blue hair made her stand out. But I wrote that a long time ago, and the style is terrible XD

And trust me, I struggle with plenty of other things. For one, not using the same words over and over lol.

@kyronthearcanin Wow, blue hair?? XD Yeah, I would like to pay more attention to it so that my characters are more different, so I thought it would be fun to see what everyone on here does. Looks like you’ve done a pretty good job on it though!😅

@rae

Cool! Yeah, it’s funny how our characters kind of reflect different parts of ourselves. And…[Read more]

This is something that I pay pretty close attention to, so I feel like I have a little bit more of a range.

With hair color I have a fairly even split between red, brown, blonde, white, and black, even some blue, so I think I’m good there lol.

With eye color I have even more of a range. I’ve gone with green, blue, hazel, amber, gray, purple,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I get it now! It’s simply the power of resistance and the fact that none of the other Paynes know that they’re being lied to. So Sef will have to confront her lies in a more obvious way than most books.

That makes sense! And yeah, definitely don’t feel like you have to take any of my advice… It’s totally up to you…[Read more]

@vinagirl (Thanks @rae for the tag XD I was super confused until I figured out why you had tagged me separately lol.)

Hi! I’m also a homeschooled Christian girl and oldest child! (Yay! XD) I go by Hybrid on here, and I write science fiction and sometimes dystopian.

It looks like you already got asked a ton of questions, and it’s getting late, so…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, wow XD I didn’t even realize it had been so long since this was posted. Sorry, I don’t know why I didn’t see it before, I know you didn’t tag me but I check the recent topics fairly often. I totally get that, but I think in future editing it might make more sense to cut the opening chapters. But it’s totally up to you…[Read more]

@jonas @whalekeeper @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @rae

@savannah_grace2009

Great job on the outline! I know it’s hard XD I’ve tried to outline my stories before, but tbh I never really got a complete outline.

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s…[Read more]

@rae

Marcel

“Why sit in a corner?” Marcel raised an eyebrow, not unkindly. “A difference like that wouldn’t stop my friends from hanging with me, and I’m a soggy mess.”

He vaguely wondered what religion Chase was alluding to.

@rae

Thx girl ❤

Also, I’m sorry he seems a little distant when saying or reacting to things. He has thoughts, but doesn’t react strongly with emotions unless it hits a nerve.

Marcel

“I’ll take that as a compliment or a gift.” Somehow, that remark gave Marcel déjà vu. He swallowed the slime in his throat from the transformation, and went back t…[Read more]