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Enid posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
Happy holidays, KaPeeFers!!!
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Me when I can barely walk at school, my classmates ask what’s wrong, and I have to tell them I stretched my muscles too much trying to learn the Charleston:

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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Babs
“Oh Baaaaaaabs…” The Vinlin’s warm, boyish face turned to her, streaked with dark curls. He tied his coat around his waist and held out his hands. “Come on!”
Babs fussed with her clothes and hair one moment too long, and he pulled her onto the dance floor.
With a squeak, she tried her very best – but what was she supposed to focus on? H…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Of course! Sorry, I think my last post lagged. I really like your idea of doing the flashback and then going to Lilitu’s pov, though!
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, I did notice that! Maybe Lilitu’s chapter could come after Sef’s?
Definitely! I hope you figure it out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Hey! I think the first one does a great job of pulling the reader in more, but the second one also has some great writing in it.
I know the chapter with Sef and her mom really means a lot to you, and it does a good job of setting up the backstory of Sef’s parents and a little bit of world building. So really they both work in…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Dante needs someone to dance with!! *glares* He can’t just stand there the whole time. He needs someone to at the very least annoy him.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Aww, thx, he loves making people happy, it makes him happy 😊
Hugo
The dance was so simple, Hugo could do it with his eyes closed. And he did. Holding Nar’s hands gently, he glided through the steps, and tilted his head up with a blissful smile.
When Nar did a funny spin under one arm, the slender boy laughed and gave her another twirl. H…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@everyone
…I’m just going to answer my own question and start the practice 😅😊
Hugo
“Why should you apologize? Look at that,” Hugo beamed. He rolled down his sleeve and spun his arm like a pinwheel.
Nar slung her satchel around to her opposite shoulder. Her face flushed faintly with confidence.
Hugo looked at her again, checked himself…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@everyone do Y’all want me to intro the teachers? Get the practice moving?
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
🤣😭 Too true
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ll be praying for you guys! I’m sorry it’s been so rough.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Hugo
Nar gave a beautiful smile, and Hugo instantly smiled back.
“Now I can answer your questions,” he said. “I’m from… well, I’m not from Lovedream, but I live there. It’s a pretty weird city stationed in between nothing and nothing, as my brother likes to say. I am not hurt, and I don’t hurt myself often.”
The young man took off his…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c Hey! Sorry I meant to respond to this when I saw it, but I got distracted with other stuff xD.
The first ones probably my favorite. The second one feels a little abrupt… almost, if that makes sense. But I think they both work!
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
S’okay to be slow, I’d rather be able to read your RPs than have to skim a pile of pages XD
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay. Well I know this doesn’t help immediately… but the opposite, little good things can build up too, if you can be mindful of them. I know you’re probably not looking for advice exactly like that, but it’s just something to think about.
Do you want to talk more about the stressful things to de-stress, or talk about s…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Hugo
Seb made a disgusted face and headed towards the nearest mirrored wall to look himself over. This was lucky; one could never have a conversation with the euphoric child listening in.
Nar immediately began firing questions.
Hugo laughed along, scattering light across his face. “Woah there, stallion’s girl. Way too many questions. Let…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
That’s okay 🙃 Is there anything in particular you’re struggling with? Or is it mostly everything in little doses together?
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh goodness, you speak truth my friend 😅😭 I’m sorry. Are you still able to enjoy the Christmas season through it all?
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Sure! I hope they can meet up at some point, because right now logistically and emotionally that won’t happen 😖 He won’t reappear until this evening or something, so maybe they meet at breakfast tomorrow? They both seem pretty quiet so they might both think of the same hiding corner and share it with each other. That could be sweet &#x…
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