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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I for one thought the spell images were kind of cool… I think they gave a glimpse into how wonderful spell-casting feels like for a wizard. You get this sense of attempting majesty, if that makes sense, and I think that aligns with Alan’s character. Also the fact that all the images had something to do with animals was rea…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle Okay, here’s one singular reinforcement.
Barnes
Barnes slipped past a colorful window, the rose and gold glass casting a soft glow along the side of her head.
The four students had exited the church, and were traveling at a slower pace. The leading teenager had kept the pace up brilliantly, and it was challenging at t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Alright!! 👍
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@liberty Hey, you’ve got to write the next scene! 😆
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whaley replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Also those could be depressive mood swings, they will probably change from morning to afternoon.
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whaley replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 4 weeks, 1 day ago
It’s okay, I’m not that offended. :] Maybe talk to someone when you’re feeling more cheerful? (I know I’m repeating myself but I don’t really know what else to tell you.)
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whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
”I’m gonna hit RAE!!!” 😁 That’s it
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@liberty X4 💨❄
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whaley replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Okay, don’t get too overwhelmed. Your mind will start racing, and when it does, take deep breaths and remind yourself to be positive.
If it makes it any easier, try writing down your feelings first. You might not understand why you feel a certain way, but that’s okay. Just find a word to describe the emotion and jot it…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Looks good!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Maybe I’ll send Barnes in your direction, since she’s a good tracker and has a soft spot for teens in trouble.
@loopylin
…I’ve been avoiding Seb for a while now. You know how sometimes you canonically change a character, but you don’t like to change them in an ongoing roleplay because it would be too confusing? It’s the same thing with…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@rae x5 ❄️ Heheheh
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Great ideas, guys XD My plan was most similar to Koshka’s because the river leaves less clues, except she uses a young hog instead of pigeons, and she actually fakes her death twice. Once in an obvious fashion with some key clues of survival only the criminals would notice, then another death scene with very little evidence at all. That way, it l…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Maybe instead of letting your emotions out in big bursts, you should process them slowly and with control. Take it step by step. You’re right, it isn’t a good idea to repress feelings, but it would be so much better to talk about them with a trusted parent or friend who can give you advice.
For example, when someone says som…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I don’t think I ever really did that either . . . unless it was like, a cut on my finger. I’ve never really heard of people licking their knees 😶
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@koshka Do your characters need assistance? U’m kind of bored right now, so punching something would bring me joy.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Where are we in terms of distance from the school? Are you guys intending to disappear or…? XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Lol, the last part. 😆
I think the scene felt a little awkward just because we haven’t seen much of Amelia and what she feels about Joseph, but I think you’re working on adding in more of that. Otherwise, good job.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed I love that scene!!
@whalekeeper @loopylin I mean sure, you can team up, as long as it doesn’t get out of hand. *hides behind a tree*
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whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I meant the latter. I wrote enough words to cover that and mine, which means collectively we have 20 snowballs for you to throw. XD
Lucille flexed her arm with a painful sigh. The wraps around her knuckles curled at the edges with dried blood and sweat. Untying them took more concentration than she thought.
She hastily downed a glass,…
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