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@ellette-giselle

Wow, that’s really cool. Definitely keep them in then.

@ellette-giselle

Wait, you wrote the hymns? I thought you had just pasted them in. 😳

(There’s a lot of hymns I’m not familiar with, since we don’t normally sing them at my church.)

@ellette-giselle

I finished! (And the art for the cover is really cool.) I gave answering those questions a shot, even though you might be past the point of feedback, I figured you might want to hear what I thought.

Were the characters believable?

For the most part, yes. At times, there was somewhat stilted (slightly forced seeming, or maybe a…[Read more]

I just realized I can’t actually flip my hair because I have a bob cut. 😐

@rae

Yeah, sEriouslyyyy… *flips hair*

@ellette-giselle

*High fives*

@rae

I second what everyone else is saying :]

@grcr

I liked it—although it has been fuel for my dislike of the word soup.

What?? You don’t like the word soup?? I love love love the word soup, you must be absolutely out of your mind, girl. 😝 You like the food though, right?

@ellette-giselle

I read Narnia, but other then that I read mostly fiction set in our world or a fantasy world that was…

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@ellette-giselle

You can’t leave me hanging there!! 😖 Although, I’m wondering if I want to know what happens next.

No real changes to the scene that I could think of. The one hymn is pretty long, but if you want to include it all, that’s fine.

@highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle

I do what I can. 🥰

@ellette-giselle

Oh, you’re not interested in strange creatures? Not even an Oiple?

At least a lot of middle grade fantasy isn’t dirty, and you can find a lot of fairy-tale-like stories. I think I’m always curious to find those stories for a younger audience which are for adults too, because they end up being the most subtle. What kind of st…[Read more]

@rae

Chase is so Chase, exactly how I pictured him.

@rae @ellette-giselle

Here, I can aid in this situation

@rae 🌬️⚪️ x14

The fire on the fire wielder looks almost like maple leaves with the color veins, and I’m all for that stylization. XD

@rae

I like the flower field, I like Rya’s hair (actually all the hair), your shading is better, your posing is better –

GIRL you’re doing so well!!

@calyhuge

I think I can say I have more fondness for the movie, even if the book is the correct source of reference in my mind. Mary Poppins is kind of the same, too.

@loopylin

I like the new version. It’s just a matter of not wanting to to change the tone of roleplaying be ause I feel like it’s really silly for other people to read for some reason. But you’re right, nobody is going to care that much. And Marcel changed for the better too.

Sorry if the way Im role playing is frustrating at all

No no no, you’re…[Read more]

@rae

*Splutters*

Wh-What is this? Why is there so much good art? My brain cannot comprehend right now.

@liberty

Oh they are very good! You like stories with animal protagonists, right? (I think.) Despareaux is right up that story lane.

@ellette-giselle

I was interesting in Tale of Despareaux for the world building involving the government. I love tyrannical Government books, and my next story might have characters getting thrown into a pit if…

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@rae

DUDE waaaaiiit, I need a moment to collect myself. It’s Chase. Dude.

@calyhuge

I’d forgotten about that. I think the movie was aiming for a more lighthearted ending (not just the ending, the whole thing in general, I suppose).