OrangeArmadillo

@smiley

Miley!! You’re back!!!

You just started a new series?? I want to hear about it! And I get the cringy old stuff thing. It’s weird to see posts that you wrote, like, two years ago still on here. 😬

What’s new with you?

@ellette-giselle

Lol 😂 As long as he doesn’t read the posts in between.

@ellette-giselle

Hmm. I’m not sure. I think that definitely raised it to the front of my mind, but honestly, in the beginning I might have still been a little suspicious (I usually am when young married woman aren’t feeling well, because that’s usually the author trying to be sneaky lol.)

I sort of accepted that your “Hmm, that would be.” me…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hah!! I called it!!

There were a whole lot of hysterics in that scene, but I guess I get where it was coming from. Joseph is so sweet to Amelia.

Oh boy… this is not good for the Cadwicks. Or Amelia and Joseph. 😬

@theshadow @the_lost-journal

F, K, and X.

Are you two siblings?

@linus-smallprint

Will keep questions in mind 👍

Glad to hear! Tyn was a character I didn’t like much in the first draft and I was considering changing her a lot until I got near the end of it and she went through some really interesting character development. I think in the draft two versions I understood her more.

I think she’s really fun, but I…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow

I’m going to guess neither of you minds what happens 😛

Barnes

Her sight flooding back to her, Barnes found one of her wrists was held by one of the magical tendrils. Her other hand was free, and Reid was recovering from a hit to the face.

In front of them, the snake lay on the ground. Its eyes faded from blue to a cloudy…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

What kind of feedback are you looking for? Do you want just a chill overview of what I think, or more detailed and critique-ish?

@ellette-giselle

Whoa. Can I ask how much of the book is still left? That seems like it’s going to be a lot of sections.

I don’t mind the longer pieces, though, (🤪) as long as you’re okay with me not being as nitpicky. Im not sure if you’re mainly wanting feedback on bigger things or if you want me to catch all the typos and everything too. If…[Read more]

*Bringing this back to the top since Christmas is over* (:

Also, I just saw what you said to Linus about Liam not being a Christian. Then how does Sabina’s statement make sense?

Sabina smiled through tears. “He is happy now. Much happier and safer than I could have ever made him, and much more loved than I could have ever loved him.”

Also, I don’t know if an orphan who hasn’t had a family for a long time…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.

I might post a bunch of stuff on here soon to cope with tearing down my plot board and reconfiguring the whole thing. They say humor is the best coping mechanism.

This definitely applies to ninety percent of story creators, and you can’t convince me otherwise

@savannah_grace2009

I want to get to this eventually! I’m trying to finish a 1,300 page book right now so I’m trying not to read too much else until I do that. XD But I’m still subscribed to this. <3

I’m a third of the way through and I already have a lot of thoughts, so that’s good! I really like Tyn, by the way, favorite character.

@linus-smallprint

I think it is high time I read through everything, that way you get a perspective from someone who doesn’t have to wait for each section and reads it in roughly a couple sittings. 👍

@keilah-h

I mean, if any lizard breed is going to be a fashion icon, it would be a chameleon

@stephie

Pff 🤪

@keilah-h

And that’s not all, you’re also riding a flying broomstick and trying to avoid two perpetually active dodgeballs.

Merry Christmas everyone!!

@keilah-h @loopylin Awesome!