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@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

@freed_and_redeemed oooh! I like it so far! If you write any more please post it.

@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka HIIIII!!!

Yessss Callan is…not good XD yall want me to post another scene?

@godlyfantasy12 heyyyy welcome back!!! Glad you’re back to writing your story. I don’t exactly have the time to give feedback yet, but I will TOTALLY be back tomorrow.

But ya callan sucks

And if she was there (she does later have a confrontation with her, Callan and November) she isn’t at that place in her character to fight back );

@loopylin sadly no XD

@loopylin awww thx!! I feel like my writing is subpar tbh….but idk sometimes posting it elsewhere helps? idk…I give myself such a hard time. I’m just writing it down, and I have to remind myself that every single second XD

@whalekeeper for me I feel like my writing isn’t like…good enough? Like it’s too childish? or…idk…not (mature isn’t the right word…) like I don’t like doing descriptions…so def description writing, but I just feel like its not great. I feel like I wrote better in the past and that thought process stinks so I try not to dwell on it…

ANYWAYYY if u want to read the scenes I’ve got…it’s November scenes… (good luck gang…don’t hate me XD)

here’s the first one! (btw I’m not looking for critiques. this is a draft and idk how the writing is honestly…im not super happy but im just getting words down.)

And its not super linear cuz Im not doing Ara’s…[Read more]

I’m sorry for replying to everyone and possibly being annoying, but you all are making sense of something I wasn’t able to make sense of myself…..

so yeah that’s a thing.

@linus-smallprint Measuring how long one arm is and using that as a baseline for the other one helps me. Also, the arms tend to end toward the bottom of the hip, with the hands extending a little farther than that.

@theducktator

but having parents read my cringey emotional or romantic scenes…*shudders*

YES. THIS.

@esther-c

Tbh, I don’t share my writing with my parents until it’s in a final or almost final draft stage. The only place I rant about my characters or my writing is really on here or any other writing community. My family knows I write, and I actually used to share a lot of it with my siblings, but now I like giving them the best, not nec…

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And I’m sure that won’t be the case, but there’s a TON of stuff I’d have to explain before I gave them, say, the 215-page fanfic I finished last year, and I don’t really feel like I want to have to do that.

@savannah_grace2009

It is still hard to not feel left out when we start talking on KP and some girls have parents who edit their book, or are in love with every part of it. I’ve just never had that.

If it helps, I rarely share my writing with my parents anymore.

After Hunterclone Run, which was a disaster that we do not talk about, I started…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 If one of the guys’ minds went in the same direction as mine and said something like ‘Yes, mom’ to Julian.

lol

also, you’re welcome!

@linus-smallprint I don’t think the horse is too small; horses vary greatly in size. If you really think it looks wrong, you can increase the size.

Alan’s arms look fine, but there is something a little off about Martha’s. I’m not sure exactly what though. I think the one holding the apple is longer than the one holding the broom by her side.…[Read more]