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Active 1 year, 10 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle If you can’t find any way to trim it down, I’d rather you keep the whole thing than delete it entirely.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle whoa I love that map!!
also, I agree with @hybridlore about how the section’s a little long. I realize that the answers to Joseph’s questions have to be properly explained–after all, I would say corrupting God’s message is far worse then never including it in the first place–but I, like her (hybridlore you are a girl right??…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle thank you!!! I had to do his eye like three times before I got it right. Same with the guy’s hand.
@rae certainly! I’m not sure when I’ll find the motivation for it lol, but I’m definitely gonna write something for it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle oof poor guy.
That’s an age where it’s gotten much harder to just kinda brush it off, but at the same time you still don’t have the capability of fully understanding it yet.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 5 days ago
@rae thank you!!
they were fun to draw. I might make this into a crossover fanfic.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 5 days ago
I don’t know how many of you on here are How To Train Your Dragon fans, but I know you’re out there lol, so here’s Toothless with Dell/Engineer from my current WIP (and in turn taken from a video game series):
I haven’t colored them yet, but I’m planning to.
this is how you know I’m really into something, when I combine it with…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle wow that was so sad!!
How old is this poor kid anyway???
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@theshadow yeah, they do lol
I think I figured it out some though.
Sniper, like the rest of his team, fears nearly nothing, except magic of any kind. (Listening to some of his voicelines on Halloween-exclusive game modes, he seems utterly terrified at the concept of being attacked by a wizard or ghost.)
Obviously Silvanis and Fairy’s powers…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle ok! I didn’t say remove the scene, it’s good.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@loopylin That’s good. So he’s a pretty chill guy, he’s just messing around.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
@grcr 🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
@theducktator No!
…..ok, fine, yes.
 I’ve already mentioned it on two forums so maybe we’ll leave this where it is……my parents will tease me to the end of the earth if they find out about the whole ordeal and I REALLY don’t want that. -
Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
@linus-smallprint ok, yeah that sounds about right!
I didn’t think of that, but you’re probably right. I kind of like whimsical, just as long as it doesn’t get cheesy.
Yeah me too!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle I like it!!
I do think it was kinda hard to figure out who the POV character is. Maybe make that a little more clear.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@whalekeeper no offense to HP fans or any series really. Just had to use something that I’ve seen split families and friendships, and I think that’s horrible.
Personally, I take the stance of “You can like whatever the Saxton Hale you like, as long as it’s not controlling you and it’s not encouraging you to try any stuff (magic, murder, substance…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@theducktator Well, other than that.
I think that falls less in the realm of “deadly sin” and more “proving yourself as an annoying miscreant.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle very helpful backstory.
I was a little concerned, but now at least it’s funny.
Still a little traumatizing for new Christians and such if you don’t know the context though lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Okay.
That was somethin’ else.
I’m not sure what to think of this. On the one hand, I kinda appreciate his zeal. On the other hand, I feel like going full on Pyro and making a show of burning Disney characters might be funny in a dark kinda way, but it’s also likely to alienate non-Christians cause then they’re…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 2 weeks ago
@the_lost-journal no problem!
and I don’t mind the German. It’s quite cool.
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