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Koshka replied to the topic Is there a trope you don't see very often that you love? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 week, 1 day ago
Ah yes, his royal highness the Black Mongoose certainly qualifies as an upbeat ninja and we need more of him.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
Since they have a Bible just like ours and reference the places within, this must take place on an alternate Earth; where, geographically, do you think it’d replace in our world?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle ohhh that makes sense!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
or like water creatures. Look up the Mosasaurus, it’s a giant extinct lizard which had fins instead on legs and swam instead of dwelling on land.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
@ellette-giselle I can see that now. The map is awesome.
….are there actually dragons?
(if you don’t wanna go the hyper fantasy route, they could just be large lizards. Think Komodo dragons.)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
@ellette-giselle cool, cool, I guess there’ll be a little town there from now on. I didn’t see the map, or if I did it was a while back ago.
are they still living in the cave or have they started doing something else? I can remember a few stories of Christian factions escaping into caves and stuff to avoid persecution and living there for a while.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 2 days ago
@the_lostj-ournal you’re welcome! just keep drawing and you’ll keep improving.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
@ellette-giselle wow! So are the other Christians gonna stay in the mountains forever (well, not forever, but at least for a decently long time, maybe make a town there) or are they gonna go over the mountains and to some hypothetical other side?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Ugh. I sound so heartless and not at all like I was tearing up AGAIN when I edited that scene, even though I’ve been over it more times then I can count.
lol
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whaley replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
@elishavet-pidyon
Thank you! And I’m glad the examples made sense to someone besides me. The characters must be protected not only for themselves, but for the sake of story legacy. ⚔️Too hesitant to kill off characters who probably should actually die for the plot/ their own arc.
Some people are definitely more like that. I fall…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle very true, it’s really worse for him.
Freezing to death is a nasty way to go though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
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whaley replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Oh yeah, I just remembered. I discussed this with another book-reading friend, and that’s why it was in my mind.
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whaley started the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
This morning, a list of thoughts suddenly popped into my head. I don’t know why. Maybe because I’ve been reading more books lately. :-]
It’s easy to think a reader’s negative response to a character death is ultimately good. You want them to feel a gut punch, right? You want them to be angry, right? You want them to cry, right? I cannot deny this…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
The great thing is, since it’s so cold, they can literally take him back to the home camp with them.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle ngl “We’ll never know” is better than explicitly saying they died to me.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
*Drops on the floor and makes a confetti angel*
I might go to college! I’m choosing to take an extra year of classes by myself, a super senior year. But it’s optional and I’m doing it to choose specific interests and decide if I want to pursue them or not.
Plus I need time to learn more practical life skills, grow healthy, etc.
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whaley replied to the topic Anyone else doing Crazy Editing Week? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
You don’t have to do it this year. But I will tell everyone who doesn’t have their own to-edit material that CEW actually supplies a bunch of stuff to edit if you need it. I’ll use some of their material myself. 🙂
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
*Dumps confetti over both of your heads*
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
This was my last day of high school. Thank you, KP, for being an awesome past-time in between school assignments. ✌️🙂
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