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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ll do it if I feel up to it, then. :]
Lucille
“Can I help?” Lucy asked, beginning to feel concerned at this point and guilty for not knowing what to do. She clutched her new handkerchief in her pocket, ready to pull it out in case he needed it, but also twisting it nervously between her fingers. “It seems like your ears get pretty sore.”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I just pulled up my doc with her story scenes and I’m sorely tempted to write more. I posted one on here a while back but I hadn’t thought to do so again.
Lucille
“Just because you’re wonderin’ it, doesn’t mean it’s true.”
Lucy paused. She peered at Gabriel intently, watching him curl forwards. She wasn’t sure what to do, but she tried to…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae
Aw that’s cute XD Not at all a bad thing to picture when you hear the name. A friend of mine is called Lucy although that’s not why I used the name.Lucille
“I guess. It might be stuffy sometimes and okay sometimes,” Lucy thought out loud. Then she reconsidered his words, realizing he maybe wasn’t just answering her question. “Hm. I’m sorry…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
The hatchet had a new cover where it hadn’t before. Lucy smiled and held it to her face to smell the rich leather.
If she was honest, sleep still sounded good. But sitting around for long felt dangerous, like playing hide and seek and staying for too long in a poor hiding spot.
Wearily, she tried not to imagine the headless man…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ll let her know! :]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
My littlest sister wants to tell you she likes Gabriel very much
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Gabriel had a point, but the house held a certain uneasiness that Lucy couldn’t shake. She was already on her way out the door, but turned when he spoke. She tapped her forehead and flicked her hand, as if tipping an invisible cap. “We should go.”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy thought about it. She swung off the bed and began rearranging the quilts and coverlet. “I’m awake now.” -
Keilah H. replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle lol it’s not like I’ve ever done that in books so I’m not offended. I’ve just seen it happen.
tbh it is aggravating but it’s not as annoying as some other stuff people do in books so it’s pretty low on my list of Things I Hate In Books.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I think it’s okay. Like Whaley said, it makes sense that the end of his arc is him turning himself in, because he knows that’s the right thing to do.
When I read it, I might not LIKE it (I don’t remember what my reaction to it was when I was beta reading) but the more I think about it the more I’ll understand why, and that in and of itself…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
“I saw a man.” She spoke quieter than she intended, but struggled to turn up her voice’s volume. “He didn’t have a mouth, Gabriel, and now he’s gone. So how are you hearin’ him?”
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whaley posted an update 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ve accidentally gone to bed with my handsome blue trench coat on and I’m sorely tempted to fall asleep in it and make it a routine. You’re telling me I can be comfortable and stylish in bed? 💅
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Gabriel: *Hears voices*
Lucy: *Wacky nightmares*
Mel: *Sleeps with ducks*
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Keep drawing while you can!
Yes she does
Lucille
Lucy pointed at the empty place. Then, confused, she put her hand down. “I – I’ve got a… Are you hearing him?”
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whaley replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
It depends on what a “slap on the face” is. I think a slap on the face is a betrayal of the reader, or unfairly maximizing/minimizing something to manipulate reader emotion, or wasting the reader’s time.
This would be a betrayal if the arc was about survival or hinged on Baron’s survival. But his arc seems entirely spiritual. He’s concluded…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Funnily enough, I fell asleep XD.
Good!
My work is done, I got my Negative argument all formulated, now it’s just doing it tomorrow without a panic attack.
Is this Lincoln-Douglas or policy?
Now that that’s done, I’m chilling and redrawing Baron artwork.
Jealous. I’m in an art slump. Not happy with anything I draw, which might mean I’m on…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
The headless man lifted a hand. His fingers trembled feebly as he held them up to his neck, as if trying to see them. He jerked back as he realized his eyes were gone.
“Lucy, it’s okay.”
Lucy snapped free of paralysis. The figure’s ashy skin peeled away, like petals wrinkling into brown dust, and he vanished from the foot of her b…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I really should have replied earlier, I’m sorry.
You’re fine! I was not up last night and I’m replying rather late now; it’s not a big deal for you to do the same.
How is your work going? I think I had the same debate topic once, not sure. I’m sorry it’s not a pleasant task for you. Also girl, late night roleplaying is fun but you need to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Also, just so you guys know, I will be out of town for the next four days and won’t be able to reply to whatever you post until afterward.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae oh that stinks, I had a speech and debate class that did like mock trials sometimes and I hated it. (they never rigged it, I just didn’t like how it worked)
my characters are currently heading your direction btw.
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You have a trench coat? That’s awesome.
I got one for my birthday!