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Snapper replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus
*melts synopsis* ATTACK!!! 😛 😀
Okay, just kidding.
So, for me, I wasn’t able to connect this:Returning to wreak his vengeance, Matthew takes on the character of the mysterious Edwin Brook.
To this:
His wealth and power make his success almost certain
I guess for me, I don’t really know anything about Edwin Brooke as a…
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Snapper replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy I have every confidence that Rogue One is going to be awesome, because it doesn’t have Anakin Skywalker or Jar Jar Binks in it. Those two characters made the prequels bad…this is not about those characters.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy …So, I think that I’ll probably just stop now because I can’t seem to write anything that I like…at all. Good luck though!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus Very good!
@kate-flournoy I think I’ll keep going…get this muse to do something with itself. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy
Sorry I’m late…I’ll see if I can conjure up a few words. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus Actually… 🙂 *evil chuckle*
Muse! You shall thus bow to my every whim! Fight this thing that you call ‘Writer’s Block’ and overcome it with your AmuseING humor. Bow! -
Snapper replied to the topic Free Verse Poems in the forum Poetry 9 years, 9 months ago
@bluejay I’ve written free verse before. Actually, It’s a poem here on KP, if you want to check it out. It’s called the Awareness of Grace. I wrote that on a whim. Just felt like trying poetry sometime (my first poem) and that’s what happened. I’m not expert….yeah, ask @spradlin. You guys could have a nice talk on the melted chair I just gave…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus *eats an icecream* I’m so glad you did well! But I’m afraid I need my own muse to come back. How’d you get yours to come back????
@kate-flournoy It’s better than I did: 529 words. 😛
And on account of my unsuccessful evening, I will now proceed to melt the chairs. *melts chairs* (Sorry @bluejay) -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@bluejay Well, good luck with your poem that is definitely cooperating. 😛
I did some brainstorming, now I’m working on a bit of research.
@kate-flournoy @daeus @jess @winter-rose Still writing, By the way. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@bluejay Yep, I’m here! You couldn’t see me because of the smoke. 😛
Now, back to business. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@bluejay Now I’ll ask you… Are you still writing? 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@jess Good job! I finished editing the chapter I’d been working on, and finished an assignment I’d been working on. I think that I’ll probably depart now to. Thanks!
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Snapper replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy 🙁 Wow… I never looked at it that way before. That just goes to show more differences between the light and dark side. I thought that the fight between the two was done very well, actually. With the two different colored lightsabers, then that one part where Ray forced his lightsaber to the ground and her lightsaber was held high.…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@jess Yay! See you then, partner!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @overcomer @jess @winter-rose @anyone else Writing tonight? I’ll be copying paper edits onto my computer if anyone wants to join.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose Good, good. *Darth Sidious chuckle* You shall be Darth (whatever you want to be called)
Okay, all joking aside, thanks for joining me! And good luck/Luke with your NaNo. (Now I’m in a Star Wars mood)
I’ve rewritten about 397 words. Myeh, but I’m only halfway done with my writing time. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose Good, good. *Darth Sidious chuckle* You shall be Darth (whatever you want to be called)
Okay, all joking aside, thanks for joining me! And good luck/Luke with your NaNo. (Now I’m in a Star Wars mood) -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose Very good! A few more words and you’re path to the dark side will be complete! (You’ve seen Star Wars, right?)
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose @daeus @kate-flournoy I will now proceed to write.
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