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Snapper replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
A book series that was written this way are the Kane Chronicles by Rick Riordian. He wrote it as if the two siblings were speaking into a microphone, recording the book. Chapter One is the brother, Chapter Two is the sister, Chapter three is the brother, chapter four is the sister and so on.
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Snapper replied to the topic *shy wave* I'm the old new person who's finally saying hi in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@ethryndal Awesomeness? I also love the Twins. They are hilarious!
And well, they have to come out with another season, because season 3 ended with a cliffhanger (not saying anything else) but it wouldn’t make sense for them to do otherwise. It’s just taking them forever. -
Snapper replied to the topic *shy wave* I'm the old new person who's finally saying hi in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@aysia-serene Yeah, they had been coming out frequently (I think there are three seasons now of Race to the Edge), but since its been forever they should come out with the new season soon enough…I hope. 🙁
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Snapper replied to the topic *shy wave* I'm the old new person who's finally saying hi in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@aysia-serene Yeah, they had been coming out in predictability, but since its been forever they should come out with the new season soon enough…I hope. 🙁
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Snapper replied to the topic *shy wave* I'm the old new person who's finally saying hi in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@aysia-serene Well, I like them. The humor is awesome, and it has a fair bit of excitement and action. The only complaint I have is that I’ve been waiting for the next season for months. And I’m on a cliffhanger!!! GAH! It’s like waiting for the Shadow Throne to come out after the Runaway King’s ending.
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Snapper replied to the topic *shy wave* I'm the old new person who's finally saying hi in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@aysia-serene Oh, Roden. That was one of the most suspenseful scenes ever! And a 3rd movie! I can’t wait until it comes out in forever amount of years. Ugh. Have you seen any of the episodes? (Race to the Edge)
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Snapper replied to the topic *shy wave* I'm the old new person who's finally saying hi in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
disappears in flames
That’s a new one. Cool!
Oh yeah and yay! Ascendance Trilogy! Her books inspired most of my writing. Sage is definitely the best of the two, though I haven’t read hardly any of the Mark of the Thief books. Which of the three books is your favorite? Mine is probably The Runaway King, but the False…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic *shy wave* I'm the old new person who's finally saying hi in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
disappears in flames
That’s a new one. Cool!
Oh yeah! Ascendance Trilogy! Her books inspired most of my writing. Sage is definitely the best of the two, though I haven’t read hardly any of the Mark of the Thief books. Which of the three books is your favorite? Mine is probably The Runaway King, but the False Prince is…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Government Conspiracies in the forum Sci-Fi 9 years, 8 months ago
Hmmm… Maybe you should tell Marvel they stole your idea then you can do it. 😛
To rouse the people more than just spying, maybe the government promises something more than protection. Money, protection, free cars, something they may want. They could also threaten the people to help…you know, ‘or else’ kinda thing. -
Snapper replied to the topic *shy wave* I'm the old new person who's finally saying hi in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@aysia-serene Wait!!!!! Did you say you like Jennifer A. Nielson??? YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! Which books?
So, you sound a lot like me. Homeschooled. Laughing at your own jokes. I do too. Drawing. Awesome; I sketch. I’ve been writing to three years too!! And really, medieval based fantasy! Same! And I love cookies.
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Snapper replied to the topic Joseph's Songbird [a Christmas short story] in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@Abigail-blomberg Wow! That’s a really awesome story!
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Snapper replied to the topic Joseph's Songbird [a Christmas short story] in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@Abigailblomberg Wow! That’s a really awesome story!
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Snapper replied to the topic Happy 2017! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@perfectfifths Happy New Year! (I am going to be so tired today for staying up till 12 and past) *yawn*
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Snapper replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
Oh yeah…heh. 😛 @daeus
Well, I kinda like the black and white idea, but I would be warned to make it readable. I don’t know what your thinking of, but what I have in my head is hard to read. And are you planning on keeping the guy in addition to the noose and the girl?? or would you loose one of them. All three of those would look cluttered. I…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
@daeus If he is struggling with something, he could be pouring over a book on a desk, his head in his hands.
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Snapper replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Just a thing about that guy (who I’m assuming is Edwin Brooke)…at first glance it looks as if he is holding an axe, not a cane. (or is it even a cane) And I also am not sure about all the faded letters in his face.
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Snapper replied to the topic Merry Christmas! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@rolena-hatfield I really enjoy getting together with family and spending time with them.
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Snapper replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 8 months ago
Otherwise, @daeus I think it’s great!
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Snapper replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Very good!
I have a few suggestions, though.
In the second sentence, you use the word ‘his’ quite a bit. Overly so.His dedication to his wronged family is powerful enough to bring him through any trial, but his youth and inexperience hold him back.
Maybe you could write it as: “Dedication to his wronged family can bring him…[Read more]
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Snapper started the topic Merry Christmas! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
I know that some of you don’t celebrate it as much as I do (we go all out), but I wanted to say Merry Christmas.
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