@nanisnook
Active 2 years, 8 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Writing Descriptions in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
Hi Natalie!
I definitely understand struggling to write descriptions. But I think I can help a little with the “show, don’t tell” advice that everyone gives us writers. It means that instead of saying, “she looked at the blue lake and liked it”, say “she admired the lake’s glittering, blue surface.”
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writing Descriptions in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@nanisnook Kingdom Pen has some great articles on description right here. 🙂
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Daisy Torres posted an update 4 years, 12 months ago
Smoke and Mirrors Chapter Eight is out! This one is really long, so don’t worry about rushing. Also, if anyone needs a link to the last chapter, just ask! Thank y’all <3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I_9csu83PSKoPHo0IyruTjk_AXwgV52yIMzNFwpiRKE/edit?usp=drivesdk
@abigail-m @issawriter7 @writerlexi1216 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j @nanisnook @n…[Read more] -
Daisy Torres posted a new activity comment 4 years, 12 months ago
@nanisnook Thank you so much!! Sorry I didn’t reply sooner, I thought I had haha.
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Daisy Torres posted an update 4 years, 12 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19tJAUfX9x93_7N71kBvKKLwCLmUeMY7E3Rf4Yuu-Vyg/edit?usp=drivesdk
Chapter 7 is here!! @abigail-m @devastate-lasting @gracie-j @nanisnook @nova21 @writerlexi1216 It’s a bit long, so don’t worry about getting to it quickly or anything <3 Have a blessed week!
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Wow that’s great!! I’ve been looking forward to it since the last one. I really like how you described the fire dress. I was able to see it.
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@nanisnook Thank you so much!! Sorry I didn’t reply sooner, I thought I had haha.
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Awesome! I can’t wait to read it:D
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@abigail-mYay!! Thank you!
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I just finished reading chapter seven! And it was so good!! I love the way that the rising action and the whole time have about a million questions about what is going to happen next:)
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@abigail-m Thank you so much!! Quick question though, because I never saw a comment or anything, did you read 6? I don’t think I taggged you on that one haha. If you didn’t that’s fine, no rush, but there may be a few things that don’t make sense XD
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No, I didn’t get to read six yet, (I thought perhaps I mixed something up with my docs), but I’d love to read it!! 😀
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@abigail-m Haha sure thing!! Here you go!!.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nXK3f5b1lWz24Q0fNNjLLlygajuFq230fxN5XjoKEYc/edit?usp=drivesdk
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@gracie-j No problem!! Thank you!! Do you want the link to 6?
AHH thank youuu so much!!! You have no idea how much that means to me!!! <33
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Daisy Torres posted an update 5 years ago
Hello, everyone! Here is chapter 6!!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nXK3f5b1lWz24Q0fNNjLLlygajuFq230fxN5XjoKEYc/edit?usp=drivesdk@nova21 @nanisnook @gracie-j @anyone-else!! (To those not on this list: If you want to be added to my tag list for updates, let me know! I don’t want to bug anyone at all, so please let me know if you want on/off!…[Read more]
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Oooh, yay!! I’d LOVE to read it!!! And yes, please tag me!! I read your prologue earlier and left some comments on the doc. It was SO AWESOME, girl!!! Can’t wait to read the rest!!! 🙂
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@writerlexi1216 Ohh thank you!!! I will certainly tag you!!
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Oh please do add me!~
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@devastate-lasting Oh yay!! Will do!!!
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Ooo, yay!! (thx for tagging me 😊) I’ll get to reading it in a minute. 😉
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Yay!! @nova21 No problem!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@nanisnook Sure!! Thank you so much for reading!
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Wyn Rose replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
@nanisnook That’s really cool! I love adventures too!
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ella replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
Hey Natalie!! (i love your name, btw)Â I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!!!!!!!!! 🎉Â So glad you’re here!!!
Here are a couple of things about me:
1)Â I have two WIPs, both containing sisters with a lot of problems 😊:Â #1Â is a futuristic/speculative, #2 is a fantasy.
2)Â I love smoothies!!
3)Â Basketball is the best sport, imo Ƕ…[Read more]
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Wyn Rose replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
Hi Natalie, it’s nice to meet you! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I also love Lord of the Rings, and Star Wars and HTTYD are pretty cool.
Random questions:
1. What inspired you to start writing?
2. Do you have a favorite character (or characters) you have written?
3. What is your favorite aspect or part of writing? (Feel free to interpret…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
That’s awesome! IÂ love Fireheart too, he is definitely one of my favorites:) The series is just so awesome.
Since I live on a farm, the Warriors series makes me look differently at our own kittypets;) -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
Hello Natalie! I’m Abigail and it’s awesome to have you here!
And *high five* yes! Another Warriors fan! 😀 Which is your favorite Warrior? Favorite book in the series? Mine is two favorites are The Code Of The Warriors and Warriors The Ultimate Guide. 🙂
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Lin replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
@nanisnook Oh, I don’t believe I’ve heard of either of those books before! I’ll have to check them out!
Ah, fantasy adventure! Classic. Fun to write. And I get you about writing fiction. I can’t really take essays.
Oo, your WIP sounds quite interesting! (And another character named Rowan…eyyy…) That sounds really great! I’d love to hear more…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
Oh, another Anne of Green Gables fan? That’s so neat!! Yes, Anne is such an amazing character, and those other books sound quite interesting!! Oh, cool! Writing can be hard, but it’s sooo worth it! Aww, I’m sure your writing is amazing 🙂
Yay, you like Tangled, too?? That’s one of the very few Disney Princess movies that I enjoy! And…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
Hi there, Natalie!! I’m Lexi, here to give you a huge welcome to Kingdom Pen! Oh, and cookies. And coffee, if you’d like. Anyways, it sounds like we already have a lot in common! I’m also a fan of Star Wars and Lord of the Rings, and I’ve heard great things about HTTYD! <333
I have a few routine questions, if you don’t mind:
1. Who…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
@nanisnook Hey there! Welcome to the Kingdom! I’m Linyang, your local…your local…uh…
Anyways, I’m so glad that you chose Kingdom Pen to be your first forum! I hope that you have a great time here! I’m homeschooled as well, and I also enjoyed those movies! So some questions so I can get to know you better, if you don’t mind…
1. What are…[Read more]
YESS!!!! Do you have the link to the last couple of chapters? I think I might can find them if I scroll down, but I don’t think I’ve not gotten to the ones you’ve shared here. If not, that’s okay!! THANKS!!! Can’t wait to read this!!! <33
Sure thing, girl!! Which chapter were you on?
Actually, I just realized I’m pretty far back, but I’ll probably catch up soon. I just don’t know if I can find the ones you shared as an activity and not a forum. Does that make sens? (Also, I’m soo sorry how long it took me to get back. I had a crazy weekend and am just catching up!)
@issawriter7 Hey, no problem girl!! Honestly same XD I’ll resend you the links!!
1-5 is on the forum, then here’s:
6: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nXK3f5b1lWz24Q0fNNjLLlygajuFq230fxN5XjoKEYc/edit?usp=drivesdk
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7: https://docs.google.com/document/d/19tJAUfX9x93_7N71kBvKKLwCLmUeMY7E3Rf4Yuu-Vyg/edit?usp=drivesdk
@issawriter7 aaand 8: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I_9csu83PSKoPHo0IyruTjk_AXwgV52yIMzNFwpiRKE/edit?usp=drivesdk
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!! <333 I can't wait to read these next chapters!!!!!!
@issawriter7 Awww RIGHT BACK AT YOU!!! I loveee your comments!!! You’re always so encouraging and sweet!!!
Awesome! I can’t wait to read it:D
@gracie-j Yayyy!!! That makes me so happy XD (Well I hope you like it then!!) Honestly, I never have any idea on lengths when I begin XD I still have some decisions in the plot I have to make, and that will either shorten it or lengthen it, so idk yet XD I do want to publish it though! If I had to guess, at this point, I’d say probably 30 or so.…[Read more]
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7–https://docs.google.com/document/d/19tJAUfX9x93_7N71kBvKKLwCLmUeMY7E3Rf4Yuu-Vyg/edit?usp=drivesdk
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nXK3f5b1lWz24Q0fNNjLLlygajuFq230fxN5XjoKEYc/edit?usp=drivesdk
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@daisy-torres
I just finished it! I love the way the plot is developing and I’m so interested in these characters 😀
@abigail-m Thank you so much!!! I’m SOO glad to hear thattt!!!