@mineralizedwritings
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Arien replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Ok so Lesli and Tauren live underground. I’m not sure how obvious that was, but the title of the series is currently “The west hills bunkers” which will definitely help the reader understand that. I might include dates in the finished version, If set in our world it would be around 3,401. Thanks for bringing that to my atten…
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @freedomwriter76
Do y’all mind if I time jump a little bit and assume everyone in Kaine, Julius, and the girls’ group have introduced themselves and know each other’s names? It’s just getting a bit confusing right now.
Also this group is about to get bigger so we’re going to need to split it up soon.
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Erica replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
So sorry it took me so long to reply! I LOVE it!! Great job!
And I like your drawing style, too.
Keep it up!!😊😁
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yeah!! XDD He’s so funny.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
We just finished putting up our Christmas Tree!!! 🙂 My brother just read this RP, and he called Everly “Mount Everest.” XDD. He loves coming up with funny/crazy nicknames.
Lyla
The boy collapsed into Everly’s arms, sobbing. He was breaking my heart–no, he had shattered…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Sorry I didn’t see what you said until I posted that.
Oh you’re fine!!Carter and Simon have no idea what a phone is. 😆 (I know, they talk like modern Americans but they’re from a less advanced world.)
Oh okay! XD Yeah, they do! Lol.But we could just do a short time jump to when Kaine leads the group back to where the boys are. I’m…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
GIRL!!!! Oh my gosh!! I LOVE IT!!! That’s soooo good ❤️❤️!! You read my mind! Yesterday, I was wondering if you had worked on a book with the brothers and was about to ask you, and this morning I saw that you had posted 😂😮😀!
Oh my, Leo!! You sweet baby🥰😢❤️. Frida 😡😤. You better watch out. You’ve got a band of Leo and brothers lov…[Read more] -
TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings
I think the throwing up part was one of our other cousins? 🤨 I remember being weirded out by what she wrote but not having the courage to change it
lol, yeah I remember that now 😂 Because we were all adding to the doc, and when I read that part I was just like… ok.
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Loopy replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings I think the throwing up part was one of our other cousins? 🤨 I remember being weirded out by what she wrote but not having the courage to change it
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yup! 😊 Our weird, morbid, thriller that we started writing six years ago. It never did get to the weird and morbid parts, though. 🤣
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings
So this is something loopylin and I (and some of our other cousins, I guess) wrote years ago. It’s technically a horror/thriller, but we never got to that part…
Enjoy
The Legend of Guy Womack (Sometimes Womback)
William Womback had never wanted to go to camp. It had been his parents’ idea. So all the things th…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yes! Share your old writing!
If you have a mouse you can just right-click, too. Emojis! 😛
The inking turned out really well!
Yay! Thanks! 😁 There’s a couple of wonky spots, but I’m satisfied
You guys have family reunions? My mom’s side has them but they are in Tennessee 😑 we are super disconnected from our greater f…
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Arien replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
So I finally got the chance to read through everything you’ve posted on here, and . . . WOW. Good job with the emotions! I can totally see this as a graphic novel!
I did have one question though . . . what kind of setting is this? Like, is it a type of fantasy, or historical fiction, or some kind of futuristic world? Or none…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
LOL That’s so funny 😂 You’ve been writing for awhile! I never considered writing at that young.
Yeah!! My mom corrected me. I was actually 4. 😂.
The fairy is never mentioned again, lol. And the fact kids don’t realize you can’t have a family of multiple animal species… 🤣😂 That’s really funny!
Yep!! Lol, I have no idea 😂.…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin

Yo! It’s not sideways!
I’m pretty satisfied
Then I realized I spelt his name wrong 💀
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Arien replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
I like the Berets and Baguettes too, great job!
Unfortunately I do not have any art . . . I never really got into drawing. But I can try to brave myself to actually share some awful writing, if that’s okay . . .
Also how do you do emojis other than the kind you make on the keyboard? I’m so clueless LOL
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I love the hair! 😍
Floooofy! 🤣🤣😂😁
I personally love inking stuff but whatever you think!
I’m gonna do it! (just hope i don’t ruin it) 😁
Yes, please join the fandom.
Yes! Berets and Baguettes has a fandom!
That looks so good!! The hair and the eyes and nose all look so realistic 💕
Thanks! 😁😊
Oh, no Guy Womack. I…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76
Elissa
Redhead motioned toward the group to follow him, said, “C’mon,” and took off.
Well, he wasn’t helpful. Elissa huffed. I might as well follow.
She went behind the last girl and started up the stairs behind them
(short and sweet) (I love the drawing of Kaine! 😂 The sp…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I love floofy hair and so I spent way too long on it 😂😂
I’ll try to get a better picture
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Here it is! 😁

I can’t figure out how to get it not to go sideways 😂
Think I should risk inking it? It’ll either end very good or very bad. 🤣
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