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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Dante
Dante’s stomach twisted, and he shifted uncomfortably.
“That was just a lie to get you in the door. You don’t want me as a brother, trust me.”
He saw the hurt look on Rory’s face, and his stomach twisted even further. He looked away.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
This was the second time someone had claimed him with that familial title. He was beginning to like it.
Aww <3
Dante
They shook hands, finally formally introduced. Rory cocked his head to the side. “Brother…?”
Dante looked at him sharply, a bit confused. “Don’t call me that.”
The doctor came in, and treated his wounds. He…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
There was another door ahead; gray, with wooden panels, it was the kind of door that hid along an equally gray wall in a sagging house.
“I want to know why it’s here.” Lucy got up and, after some thought, played a descending scale.
The floor creaked. As Lucy played, the room shifted like a ship at sea, and when she looked at the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
‘Racist Hospital Workers Let Kid Die.’
😂 I’m dying
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Dante
The hospital was close. Rory helped Dante walk to the bus stop, and then rode with him to the emergency room. Rory seemed tense and wary on the bus, but then, so was Dante. They picked a seat near the door, and kept an eye on the other passengers.
When they arrived, a nurse told them that a doctor was available to treat…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@loopylin
Yep, those are the rules I remember -
whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
Lucy had to choke down a snort. She took the piano lid and pulled. It was heavy but had no hinges. It fell off with a thunderous boom. She scampered back, lost her balance, and sat down suddenly. Dust rose and she let out two sharp sneezes.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months ago
@rae thank you! My dad said the same so it looks like this is a keeper!
My prose is weird lol. I kept it in my style (sorta like my fanfic) but I also wanted to inject a bit of the style from books I like.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
So I’m thinking of the rules my school played with as a kid:
1. If someone catches a ball mid-air without fumbling it, the ref sends in one of their teammates who got out.
2. You can dodge or block a ball coming at you with another ball that you’re holding.
3. You start out with all the balls in the middle of the court, and everyone has to rush…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @theducktator
Felicity
Shoes squeaked on the gym floor as Marcel’s team spread out. Felicity found a place somewhere in the middle of the gym. She did some arm stretches while eyeing the other team. There were a few people she recognized: Viktor, Lois, and one of the twins. She finished her stretches, and began b…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Thanks <3
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@theducktator Ugh headaches are the worst. Stop looking at screens and drink some water. Hope you feel better soon <3
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
BAhaha XD
I think it’s safe to say this is a weird place and there can be weird random objects scattered within. Maybe that says something about the labyrinth masters, not so much the piano itself.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
“You’ve…” Lucy trailed off, brow furrowing. She clacked her fingers over the keys and tried to play a folk song, but only knew a few seconds of it.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
“Dunno why they’d put a piano in here. I wonder who they are.” Lucy couldn’t tell if they had returned to ground level – after taking the door that led into earth – or if they were in the labyrinth’s basement. The floor had sloped slightly as they walked, sometimes up and sometimes down. Even here, her internal compass was…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
That was lovely. Your descriptions are so pretty, and it’s such a tight piece of short fiction. Hopefully you don’t regret posting it anymore because we appreciated reading it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months ago
You guys can comment on the doc. If you haven’t seen me update it in a while, badger me into writing more (preferably here rather than there) lol
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Keilah H. started the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months ago
yep, it’s just a prologue and part of 1 chapter right now but hey! I actually did it!
here ya go if you wanna read it:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-8Up1XMYeuBavdafSNez1AVIVX4v6inMa9Q4gXBeYpY/edit?usp=sharing
Now, to those who have read my fanfic, it does have identical species names to them, but know that the Argonites, Salamandrion,…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
Lucy bent her right arm and flexed, her confidence incidentally boosted. “Mm-hm. Good.”
Short reply because I figured Gabriel will lead us on
Yeah, big-sibling little-kid energy but also mentor-follower. Lu doesn’t have siblings either and she’s mentally associating this with adults she knows. If she becomes Barnes again,…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@rae Yesssss hehe
@theducktator I know lol, but that’s not as funny
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