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@whalekeeper

I really do understand what you mean about external conflict though

Def the 1st book had the conflict with all of the war things, all of the antagonists, resistance, etc

The 2nd book has external conflict mostly involving tension between people, alcoholism (for Leon), fights, acted upon hatred, etc

Like how in the second book,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I’ve actually heard a lot of authors say internal is harder, and I don’t understand it 😂 External is sooooo much harder for me. It wasn’t as hard in the 1st book, but Hans was a huge contributor to that

@whalekeeper

lol, you’re good. Ik you don’t know my book as well, so you’re fine XD Def noted what you said about external…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Oh my goodness!!!! 😍😍 I love him!!!!!!!!! Ty so much!!! <3

@ellette-giselle

Congratulations on publishing your novel! Is it through Amazon, or what? What’s it about?

Okay, awesome! Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I LOVE it! Thank you so much!

@whalekeeper

Mmmmm

 
Aragorn from Lord of the Rings is currently stuck in my head 😂👀
You could draw him if you wanted

Or I can pick one of my charries. But Aragorn is 💯 stuck in my head rn😂

@whalekeeper Aww your chibi style is adorable <3

umm does the character have to be human?

@freed_and_redeemed

You’re up next, girl! I’m not sure which of your charries to choose XD Is any particular charrie sticking in your head right now? Or just any fictional character in general?

@hybridlore

Hope you like her!! I wasn’t sure what tone of tan her skin was. Regardless, I love her name and vibe.

@freed_and_redeemed

Oof lol, I missed hard with the Riker ideas. 😂 So you’re sticking with the same internal ideas throughout all three books? Is there, like, a clear turning point at the end of the first book, so you know where to move forward? I’d guess you included some revelation/change with both guys, so you could start there. Then make a…[Read more]

Let’s try that again . . . @ellette-giselle

@ellette_giselle

If you’re not too busy, I would love a drawing of one of my characters! The same one I gave Whaley, Noa Montero. I can post her description here in a minute…

Also, I can’t remember if I introduced myself before… sorry if I haven’t. I’m hybridlore, a homeschooled soon-to-be-junior and I write YA science fiction. It’s nice to…[Read more]

Long story short, External conflict is not my forte. I much more prefer internal conflict😂

@whalekeeper Ty for the ideas, girlie 💖

The ideas for Leon are def more for his 2nd book

Tho he still struggles with grief, remaining pain, and still his PTSD (Riker also still wrestles with PTSD, both from the camp and from his abused childhood🫠😅), he’s left the vengeance behind, leaving the men that harmed him in God’s hands

and as for Riker,…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Congrats, the cover looks so cool!!! Writing a whole book is crazy committed✨🤩

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh lol I can give you some ideas!! Plot is always hard 😝

They might not be along the lines of what your goals are, but just some thoughts. External conflict doesn’t have to be super action-y, it just has to be a character taking…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Yayyy!!!!! That’s so exciting!!! I’m so happy for you Ava!!! 🥳 *cake for everyone* 🎂

@ellette-giselle

Oki I have a doodle for you! I enjoyed practicing line hardness, since that’s a weakness of mine. So your charries helped 🤣