MineralizedWritings

@rae haha they’re so cute!

Leon’s face gives me “I’m done with all this nonsense” vibes lol

@rae awesome! Thanks!

yeah my artstyle really doesn’t support kids’ soft features lol

@ellette-giselle

Thank you sooo much, do you have any thoughts/ comments??? I’d love to hear them!

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay great!!!

I guess some of both? Like what the Andromedans would call Him, as well as new names for what the humans could call Him?

@linus-smallprint

Oooh! You use Reedsy too?!?!

I’M NOT THE ONLY ONE!!!
How do you like it??

@whalekeeper I don’t have any original characters but I kinda want to see the Bad Batch in this style…..lol

@calyhuge lol

@theducktator @loopylin @rae hahaha!!!

@grcr @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator

Shared possible book blurb up above

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @rae @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @koshka @whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6

Anyone wanna read the possible book blurb for Broken Shackles? 👀

In continuation of Freedom’s Fire

The Second World War has finally come to an end, and

both Leon Wagner and Riker Schind must live with

the aftermaths of war and…

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@ellette-giselle Oh my goodness, thank you!!!! she looks amazing!! <3

@hybridlore

Thank you soooo much!!! <3

@savannah_grace2009

Great chapters! I love the way you described this

worry striking a searing flame in the pit of her stomach.

And I love Cassian and Lilitu’s relationship. 🥰

@ellette-giselle
Wow, it looks great!! Thank you so much!!!

@anyone-who-wishes-to-read

Chapter 7

Rage

Pain.

A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.

On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.

Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.

Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]

@jonas

you want an em dash instead of a hyphen

Noted. Thank you!!!

Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?

She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Let me think….yEs PlEaSe HeLp Me 😭😭😭

If you’re busy though, that’s fine no worries!

@rae

Sef

“You’re like my mom.”

She caught Chase staring, and giggled.

“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”

She stroked the bird with her finger again.

@calyhuge

Sounds great XD I’m kinda excited!!!

@rae

Omc I’m so sorry…give me a second…I forgot AND I’ve been on a break for four days :/

@rae

OH.

MY.

GOODNESS!!! 💖🤩🥹😭

They are SO FREAKING ADORABLE!!! Oh my goshhhhhhh. And someone drew MY characters while they were bored??🥹🥹

Oh my goodness

Thank youuuuuuuu💖💖💖

You just made my day 🥰🥰🥰

I think there’s a bit of over explaining going on with the world building (telling not showing), though it’s not as much as I typically see in early drafts.