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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Oh yeah, it does. It’s all for my grade. Although, at this point, I care more about the novel than the grade. I’m planning on writing it all in the semester and then going through and heavily editing it. And add a lot of chapters in the middle cause they are not giving me enough for my precious character growth!
Yup, short…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic WIP edits? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
First Chapter:
The woman that sat across from him was the definition of perfection. Her stunning eyes glinted and brought out her beautiful hair. With unnatural grace, she reached forward to grab her glass and brought it to her lips. The woman took a sip before speaking.
“Thank you, Nolan, for taking me here. Bonduelle is s…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic WIP edits? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Thank you! I’ve got grammarly, so grammar shouldn’t be too much of a problem. My biggest things are the story, if it makes sense, and if the actual writing flows well.
Don’t worry, I absolutely understand! I’m really busy right now, too. I would just love some extra feedback. And if you know anyone that might be interested,…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
C’mon KP, work. It’s just one problem, though, I can still do most things!
Thank you! (I got a couple of them from name generators 😐 I live off of mithril and mages)
The only reason I’m getting anywhere on this is that it’s for my Novel in a Semester class I’m taking. 🤣 It’s making me push past procrastination. Or at least…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne started the topic WIP edits? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @ava-blue @folith-feolin
Would any of you mind reading and editing my novel? I don’t have a lot of editors right now (Thank you @loopylin for being one of the few! 😊 You’re awesome!). I only get one chapter out a week at the most and am only six chapters in now so it shouldn’t be too time-consuming. Or, if…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Thanks!!!! 😁😊
They’re actually both in chapter six, which I am… working on. 😐 But I’ll send it to you once it’s finished! I think Grant is slowly replacing Cammie as my favorite, too.
(Elissa is the one we were talking about earlier. You gave me the idea, so thanks! 🙂
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
woops. I messed up your tag. Anyway, I attempted a blurb! And KP isn’t working so, yea. Tell me what you think!
He took the maglev train.
Milo Trone has been living his life inside a simulation. Every part of his life feeds into it. It surrounded him in his childhood and stayed. He has a lowly job as a maintenance worker at…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
@freedomwriter @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
So, I attempted a blurb. 😐 And KP won’t let me go to my profile page so I’m stuck here. Tell me what you think?! 😊
He took the maglev train.
Milo Trone has been living his life inside a simulation. Every part of his life feeds into it. It surrounded him in his childhood and stayed. He works a…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Help me name my character? in the forum Characters 2 years ago
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Help me name my character? in the forum Characters 2 years ago
Oh, I recognize the names but I can’t think of what it is! And Lemon-Head is adorable. I love your art for her, too!
Anyway, names. I have absolutely no reasoning or meaning behind these, they just popped into my head. 😊
1. Eda
2. Something that starts with a J. She seems like a J. Don’t question it. 😆
3. Bella
4. Hanna (I’ve…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Oh aaand they all have cool outfits but for now all I say is Kami has these cool golden gauntlets she has to wear and Bronwen has a cloak and intricate leather bracers 😎
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Ava Blue replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Here’s an idea for a fantasy AU with Bronwen and the crew! It’s super loose, ideas would be much appreciated.
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12I’ll go with the classic magic-has-been-outlawed-in-the-kingdom story as a base. Bronwen and company all happen to have inherited magic talents and once they find each other they gang up and…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
Another thing for art class! I was only allowed to use one set of complementary colors so I chose orange and blue. The water, highlights and floaty details (stars, bubbles, flowers etc.) were done in white acrylic. The jellyfish were done in oil pastel on top of the blue paint. This was a redo of an assignment I screwed up on and I really…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
I drew this for art class. I was only allowed to use black, white, and one color (and I could blend them, of course). This is a barn owl, one of my favorite birds! Fun fact, their scientific name is Tyto alba, and they are the most commonly recognized species of owls. I have yet to see one in person!
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
Art dump time! This is something I drew for a halloween prompt in my art club.
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years ago
That is so cool! Crafting is the best when you can use what you made. But yeah, it can be expensive. I craft a little but mostly just draw. I don’t do one thing a lot, but occasionally try making new things.
~Edgy Pretending~ 😆 It’s true, though. Kids can be dark. 😳 That is a morbid way to die. That’s cool, though! Liquified…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years ago
Leatherworking sounds so cool! I can also see how it would be expensive. 😐 What else have you made?
That’s so cool that you got to see the bird! And there is some good ice cream in Coeur d’Alene. That sounds like a lot of fun to do with your family!
I used to have a cardboard castle, too. My childhood is chock-full of…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years ago
Oh cool, you made it? What is it made of?
We have to take the driver’s Ed class, then our six hours of driving and six hours of watching with an instructor, then 50 hours or six months of permit driving, 10 at night. Then you take the tests and you get your license!
Oh, don’t worry, come to Idaho! We love the nice people.…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years ago
Oh no, It got stolen! I’m sorry!
In Idaho, you have to finish all six drives before you get your driver’s permit. So, two more drives with the instructor and I’m on the streets 😲 You also have to have six hours of time as the passenger watching another driver so I’ve been doing all my drives with a friend. It’s been a lot of…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years ago
Ugh, school. 🙄 I’m doing driver’s Ed too! I have my fifth drive tomorrow.
Bird-watching sounds so cool! Hopefully, you can do it again someday. It sounds like you have some good memories. I don’t live in a big city but it’s growing bigger. Lots of new houses. So glad about the place I live in, though, because you don’t have…[Read more]
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