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@mineralizedwritings

I’ve actually been having a tough time with Milo and goals. Because he is addicted to the simulation he doesn’t really have any goals except level up on the simulation. So I guess I’m giving him goals. Shoving them in his face. Same with the drive. What drives him? Pretty much nothing except the simulation. So I have to give…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much for reading it!

So, Milo’s features. I didn’t actually think about it until I was making character charts so I’ll probably go back and add it.

A lot of it will actually take place in the outside world, more and more as Milo uses the simulation less. But outside outside not as much. The simulation was made…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks! Also, it’s not dystopian as I usually picture it (as in the government is clearly up to things and there is a lot of death). I think it is a little closer to Fahrenheit 451 in that it has more social problems than government problems. But not even that, though. My best explanation would be Sci-Fi with obvious social…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh yeah, it does. It’s all for my grade. Although, at this point, I care more about the novel than the grade. I’m planning on writing it all in the semester and then going through and heavily editing it. And add a lot of chapters in the middle cause they are not giving me enough for my precious character growth!

Yup, short…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

First Chapter:

The woman that sat across from him was the definition of perfection. Her stunning eyes glinted and brought out her beautiful hair. With unnatural grace, she reached forward to grab her glass and brought it to her lips. The woman took a sip before speaking.

“Thank you, Nolan, for taking me here. Bonduelle is s…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you! I’ve got grammarly, so grammar shouldn’t be too much of a problem. My biggest things are the story, if it makes sense, and if the actual writing flows well.

Don’t worry, I absolutely understand! I’m really busy right now, too. I would just love some extra feedback. And if you know anyone that might be interested,…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

C’mon KP, work. It’s just one problem, though, I can still do most things!

Thank you! (I got a couple of them from name generators 😐 I live off of mithril and mages)

The only reason I’m getting anywhere on this is that it’s for my Novel in a Semester class I’m taking. 🤣 It’s making me push past procrastination. Or at least…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thanks!!!! 😁😊

They’re actually both in chapter six, which I am… working on. 😐 But I’ll send it to you once it’s finished! I think Grant is slowly replacing Cammie as my favorite, too.

(Elissa is the one we were talking about earlier. You gave me the idea, so thanks! 🙂

@freedomwriter76

woops. I messed up your tag. Anyway, I attempted a blurb! And KP isn’t working so, yea. Tell me what you think!

He took the maglev train.

Milo Trone has been living his life inside a simulation. Every part of his life feeds into it. It surrounded him in his childhood and stayed. He has a lowly job as a maintenance worker at…[Read more]

@freedomwriter @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

So, I attempted a blurb. 😐 And KP won’t let me go to my profile page so I’m stuck here. Tell me what you think?! 😊

He took the maglev train.

Milo Trone has been living his life inside a simulation. Every part of his life feeds into it. It surrounded him in his childhood and stayed. He works a…[Read more]

@loopylin @power

Yaas! Lemon Head as a nickname! And she can have a real name too, cause that’s how nicknames work. Or not. Who knows? (Loopy does) 😄

@loopylin

Oh, I recognize the names but I can’t think of what it is! And Lemon-Head is adorable. I love your art for her, too!

Anyway, names. I have absolutely no reasoning or meaning behind these, they just popped into my head. 😊

1. Eda

2. Something that starts with a J. She seems like a J. Don’t question it. 😆

3. Bella

4. Hanna (I’ve…[Read more]

Oh aaand they all have cool outfits but for now all I say is Kami has these cool golden gauntlets she has to wear and Bronwen has a cloak and intricate leather bracers 😎

Here’s an idea for a fantasy AU with Bronwen and the crew! It’s super loose, ideas would be much appreciated.
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

I’ll go with the classic magic-has-been-outlawed-in-the-kingdom story as a base. Bronwen and company all happen to have inherited magic talents and once they find each other they gang up and…[Read more]

Another thing for art class! I was only allowed to use one set of complementary colors so I chose orange and blue. The water, highlights and floaty details (stars, bubbles, flowers etc.) were done in white acrylic. The jellyfish were done in oil pastel on top of the blue paint. This was a redo of an assignment I screwed up on and I really…[Read more]

I drew this for art class. I was only allowed to use black, white, and one color (and I could blend them, of course). This is a barn owl, one of my favorite birds! Fun fact, their scientific name is Tyto alba, and they are the most commonly recognized species of owls. I have yet to see one in person!

Art dump time! This is something I drew for a halloween prompt in my art club.

@mineralizedwritings

That is so cool! Crafting is the best when you can use what you made. But yeah, it can be expensive. I craft a little but mostly just draw. I don’t do one thing a lot, but occasionally try making new things.

~Edgy Pretending~ 😆 It’s true, though. Kids can be dark. 😳 That is a morbid way to die. That’s cool, though! Liquified…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Leatherworking sounds so cool! I can also see how it would be expensive. 😐 What else have you made?

That’s so cool that you got to see the bird! And there is some good ice cream in Coeur d’Alene. That sounds like a lot of fun to do with your family!

I used to have a cardboard castle, too. My childhood is chock-full of…[Read more]