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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper and cookies. 😀
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
“You only ever show up to tell me things I don’t want to hear!”
This has got to be my new motto. xD Nicely done. I laughed while reading it.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nineteen: Tying Theme Together in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 1 month ago
Analyzing other stories for theme lessons that you can apply to your own stories is an awesome course of action to take. Since last summer, I’ve kept an excel sheet of all the stories I’ve read/watched and the storytelling applications I can glean from them, and that’s been incredibly helpful in my own journey as a writer.
I’m always thrilled to…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 13: Theme & Antagonist in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 1 month ago
@jenali Awesome–thanks for making all that clear. Those look like good foils. I especially like the potential for interplay you have within the antagonists, specifically thinking about Manel and Tekal’s similar views on loyalty. Does Manel take a similar course of action to Tekal (giving gifts) to obtain loyalty, or does he use a different tack?…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for letting me know what works for you all! Sounds like it’s harder to find a good date for everyone this time around. By any chance, would the 19th or the 21st at the same time work any better? If enough people say by Sunday night that one of those times would work better, we’ll do that. Otherwise, we’ll do the 13th or…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 1 month ago
@jenali Detailing those physical consequences there helps to clarify the poetic justice on that front. Looks good!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 10: Theme & Scene Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 1 month ago
@jenali Ah–sorry for not seeing this before! Thanks for the tag. Both of those look great!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eleven: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 1 month ago
@jenali Got it. Thanks for the feedback!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nineteen: Tying Theme Together in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 1 month ago
@Aratrea my future course? Since I’ve already gone through all my next ten ideas and mapped out their themes in excruciating detail, I suppose you mean more futurely than that… um… continue? XD Pick other stories to pieces and keep learning and applying as I do, hopefully.
Seriously. There are no words for how amazing this was. I am…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nineteen: Tying Theme Together in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 1 month ago
@Aratrea my future course? Since I’ve already gone through all my next ten ideas and mapped out their themes in excruciating detail, I suppose you mean more futurely than that… um… continue? XD Pick other stories to pieces and keep learning and applying as I do, hopefully.
Seriously. There are no words for how amazing this was. I am…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Dragon-Snapper *bows, flourishes cape* Awesome is after all our job description. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Maybe my obsession with psychology… or those of us who are devoted Kylo Ren fans as opposed to otherwise. :’D
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Dragon-Snapper I vote for a sequel! Ummm… I can’t think of anything right off the top of my head I particularly want, but I’ll let you know if I do. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Northerner ha! :’D
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic G.K. Chesterton in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@GracieGirl *squeals* Did you read it!!!??? Wasn’t it awesome? The thing about G. K. Chesterton’s stuff is that you read it, and by the time you get to the end it’s never about what you thought it was going to be about, but somehow manages to be even more awesome. 😀
Incidentally I also read The Man Who Was Thursday and loved it as well. It was…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Because when does Kate not come up with a name that doesn’t mean something?
@Hope *cough* That would be ‘When does Kate ever come up with a name that doesn’t mean something?’
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Help with a Story Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@delightinlife Audrey and Jane had great thoughts on things you can change about a story to make it appear fresh again. I’ve read stuff from several different authors who experience the same thing, and sometimes this can be an unfortunate side effect of thinking about a project too much before working on it! There’s an old blog post I wrote on…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 13: Theme & Antagonist in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 1 month ago
@jenali What’s the focusing question and message of your book, and what’s your character’s EiL, just so I understand everything that’s going on in your story?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Thirteen: Theme & Antagonists in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 1 month ago
@jenali That’s awesome to hear! 😀 It definitely opened up my view of storytelling as well when I realized that several years ago. Haven’t read The Last Unicorn, but it sounds like a good example. Isabella is definitely both in Northanger Abbey, and I agree that she’s more of an influencer. On a side note, isn’t Northanger Abbey just a fantastic…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Twelve: Foil Characters in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 1 month ago
@jenali Great example! Charlotte and Elizabeth are great foil characters in Pride and Prejudice. Those sorts of foils can definitely work very effectively.
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