Michael Stanton

XD @That_Writer_Girl_99 unfortunately the rest of my family sets very high priorities on food.

*shrugs* Well… if we want pizza this winter we need the sauce, so… *grins*

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@That_Writer_Girl_99 unfortunately not. :'( We’ve been canning tomatoes today and consequently I have a lot of work to catch up on.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 oooh, I really like them! Very nice. 🙂

@Catwing kewl. 😀

@Anne-of-Lothlorien yay! So exciting!

Great! Thank you @hope. Have a blessed day. 🙂

@aislinn-mollisong I only had time to look through the prologue and chapter one, but here’s a couple things I noted:

The prose feels very choppy and is very bare-bones. Try fleshing out your descriptions more and varying the sentence structure for the writing to feel more smooth.

You do a lot of telling as opposed to showing, which is probably…[Read more]

Praying, everybody.

@perfectfifths Good to know! My to-read list is ridiculously long, but I’ll see if I can fit that somewhere on it. xD

@daeus I’m a fan. YES.

@Dragon-Snapper I commend thy wisdom.

@Dragon-Snapper ehh… I do believe she likes onion rings. Blech. *shivers*

@Dragon-Snapper actually not sure if she likes raspberries… never thought to ask her. 😛
@DaughteroftheKing thank you! Cookies— yes. *munches them immediately and forgets to save them for later*

@Dragon-Snapper *sniffs* There are more polite methods of correction. But rest assured, I shall. ;P
And I prefer chicken.

@Dragon-Snapper I found a dragon-trainer and have been intensively competing on a nightly basis with just one. I may eventually come to this dear little corner again, but the competition was a little much with all of you guys here, so I feel like I need to recover from that. 😛 Never fear. The game continues.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 awesome! Which doc?

@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’m here now and will be until two o’ clock, and then I might be here again around three. I’ll tag you if I am.

*sighs* Oh well. We’ll figure it out someway. 😛