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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
aw yesss
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…
It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?
Ummmm
Let me think lol
I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol
And character development ideas would be helpful too!!
I also just want to know t…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????
Yeah lol
you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD
The frog wedding is adorable.
I KNOWWWW
YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!
no comment….
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.
NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS😱😱😱😱
*sobs hysterically*
Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!
yesssss
*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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Perhaps I’ll share it on here if i ever follow through with anything…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
AHHH GIRL I LOVE THIS
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
AH, I love the boards!! I think my favorite one is either Acheron’s or Jared’s!! 😀
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-GRCR- replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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-GRCR- posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
Dirty water splashed on my heavy boots as I made my way through Bröijin—the largest of Englroy’s abandoned prisons. Something dripped from the roof—likely old water that had been trapped in the room above. A few doors creaked as they swung on their rusting hinges. There was a draft blowing from somewhere, but I could no longer feel it as I turned…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
EEEEEEEE Thank youuu! It’s quite funny to me that it’s what it reminded you of because three of them are actually training to be warriors lolol. Maybe I’ll run with that…
Oh, looks like Whaley agrees with me!! XD
Lolol 😄
I guess I’ll have to just start one something then…
*quite excited and motivated to draw a comic*
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Good ideas!!! I will probably use those in future scenes…thank you so much!!!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
AHHH thank you!! That really means so much to me! 💜💜
I really want to make a comic, I just can’t figure out what to do it about. I have sooommething started a little… a superhero one-shot… I just… eh. 😅😁
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Here’s another picture I created…. pretty happy with it. 😁

Not really done, but blehhh.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeppp!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I liked how you had Neveah try to combat the lie, and it’s obvious it’s for Sef’s sake, not her own. To make this sequence really work, maybe make Sef think her Mani is just trying to save herself – it’s not a lie about Sef, but it would make the former lie hit home. Make her really crumble since the last thing keeping the lie f…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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