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@grcr

It’s okay…I was more concerned about Hugo and Ottoline remaining a “thing”.

You can change your character if you want.

@savannah_grace2009

Cool! Sounds good! Continuing the story in the different world would be awesome.

(I’m pretty much fine with whatever.)

(However, I don’t know if I’d want to continue using Lane… I might change my character out, unless ya’ll don’t mind me adding a second character…)

@rae @grcr

Oh, Rae, I meant just the next POV for the current RP! But that’s fine, it would be fun to do a new one!

We could have it so the characters at the “party” get teleported to the world via the house’s magical powers. Lol. I know that sounds stupid…but I kind of don’t want to start over, I think it would be fun if the story continues,…[Read more]

@rae

If you don’t mind me giving my opinion, I think the second idea sounds cool! 😄

@freedomwriter

Ooo!! 😃 Nice!

@freedomwriter76

thanks!! 😄

@rae

. While Rishona may grow angry, I doubt in such a perfect world she would try to slap someone with no respect. If Elysium is perfect, and the is no pain, there would be no point in slapping someone.

4.Fear is also an emotion I don’t think she could even feel (except the Fear of God) until after she sins. Read genesis 3 aain, and notice tha…

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@savannah_grace2009

🙂 Thanks!

@hybridlore

😊 Thank you!!

@grcr

Sounds cool!

@rae

Okay! 🙂

Aaaaand, here is the last of this WIP’s boards (well, besides their trainer’s board, but that one isn’t finished anyway…)

No matter, this is Rigger Driscoll’s board… I love it a whole ton…

@savannah_grace2009

lol. Alright, so I’m still collecting my thoughts a bit, but here’s what I took down so far:

When a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to become a warrior comes to the southern Burnish orphanages, five of the one hundred competent orphans chose to become warriors. Among those was the quiet and loyal Shrapti Yelper, son of the…[Read more]

@grcr

Okay, what is your story about? I’m intrigued, your mood boards are really interesting!

@jonas

Is this better?

“Scared you?” The boy smirked. His voice was weak, and his hands trembled a bit, but he lifted his chin, and wet his lips with the determination of a warrior, shaking his mess of black hair out of his eyes. His eyes fell on Ottoline. “That’s low,” he looked at the Traitor. “You’re going to have a girl kill me?” Ottoline…

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@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

GUYS….thoughts on this book cover??? I made it last night and idk if I love it or hate it….

@jonas

So, with Marcurious’ concern that Ottoline will want revenge, maybe you could put that in later, the next time they see each other. It seems odd that Marcurious, while he is suffering from the effects of poison and surrounded by his captors, is worried that a fellow prisoner might attack him. He doesn’t even have to notice her, given the…

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@whalekeeper

It’s just when you spend all your time learning to understand other people, you forget to develop your own sense of self, you know? It doesn’t come as easy.

That’s me when I’ve been writing for too long…