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@savannah_grace2009

And the “Ottoline Walton” line was SOOO something Marcurious would say…you nailed it!

Thank you!!

@rae

Putting last names together! XD, my big brother did that when he found out who my crush was!This scene is sooooooooo sweet!

Thank you! My little brother does that to me also, lol XD

@savannah_grace2009

Everyone above gave such great advice that I dont really have much to add. I sometimes worry about things too, that my book is to dark and I worry that my style changes throughout the WIP. I also doubt myself, but I realized that I shouldn’t be, you are the only one who can tell the story you are telling. It may be hard to…[Read more]

Fracture

“How DARE YOU CALL ME CONFUSING!!!” he balled up his fists.

@acancello

Aww it’s so sweet! I LOVE IT!

And the “Ottoline Walton” line was SOOO something Marcurious would say…you nailed it!

@everyone

The scene above is a little old, but I felt like I had to finish off the last part that I forgot to do, so just continue with the journey were doing now 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry this is a little late! (Ignore all mistakes I’m writing this fast, lol! )

Hugo

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“I’m sorry,” Ottoline laughed a little, “All I do is cry,” she smiled wryly. Hugo smiled at her and held her hand tighter.

A man sat down next to Ottoline, “I don’t think we’ve met,” he addressed Hugo, sticking out his hand. “I’m Ma…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Ive always used Google docs, sometimes they do get laggy but you just have to be a bit patient *Heres me over here pounding the keys and yelling at the computer while all my family is looking at me like I’m insane* XD  But doc works great! The one with my WIP on is currently 138 pages and it works just fine, Id say about 95% of the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you, Freedom! You’re really good at encouraging people XD

That really means a lot.

@everyone

Thanks guys! You guys really are good at inspiring me lol!

@jonas

Thank you so much, that means a lot.

I think that my current project has just grown on me a lot. I’m like emotionally attached to it, and I’m just afraid that if it never gets published then I will have wasted all these hours. I feel like if it doesn’t get published I’ll never be able to tell the message that God has put on my heart to…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I’ve never used Google Docs before (or at least I can’t remember ever using it)… But I have used Word before. Actually, I used Word to type everything, back in the day. I don’t use it anymore… and I kinda don’t remember a lot about it. 😅

When I got an iPad and a Mac a few years ago, I started to do all of my typing on Pages. Aa…[Read more]

@rae

okay XD

…choose whether or not to sacrifice themselves as well, or…

@jonas

Oh yeah, right.

@jonas

It’s fine, your’s was better. “split personalities????” where do I get this stuff XD

@jonas

I know. I was only mostly joking.

I think @acancello needs to make Hugo talk to Ottoline, and @rae might need to do a transition scene? Idk.

…having split personalities…

@jonas

Same…I would write one…but I kind of have to know what I’m talking about to write one, lol

I’m bored. WE NEED MORE CHAOS!!!!!!

@jonas

Sorry I couldn’t help more! Plotting is just really new to me….so it’s hard to give good advice XD