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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
“I am, I’m just trying to be mature about it.” He gave her a playful wink and squeezed her hand.
Maybe if she studied his face long enough she’d find something to not like.
“Says the kid who gave every girl in his fourth grade class a valentine.”
LOL I love these parts. 💛💛
Also I have two questions… don’t listen to me if you don’t…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
*sob*
There’s a small kingdom settled on the jagged crown of a snow covered mountain—a kingdom named Modorid by the people who founded it some thousand years ago. It was the only settlement for miles and miles, and most have forgotten it’s there. It is inhabited by the Modoish—jovial people with hair as white as the snow that filled their c…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Yayyy, another call! Count me innnn!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 3 weeks ago
correct, the priest isn’t forgiving the sins. It is God.
*is confused* If you know it’s God forgiving the sins, then why do you guys go to confession to a priest at all? Why not just ask God?
I’m sorry if that sounded rude…I don’t mean it that way, I’m just very confused and trying to understand.
And about mega churches, my c…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I’m so sorry, I forgot about this!!!!
I think it’s a new day, so where do you want to continue? XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
are you looking for critiques? Or just posting for fun?
I just wanted to make sure…I don’t want to assume you want critiques if you’re just wanting to share it with us! 🙃
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Saraaaa… 🥹 Girl you’re so sweet.
I’M SERIOUS…I LOVE IT SO MUCH
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
That’s so funny…My sister Hallie’s nickname is Hal…we call her that all the time XDXD
When she was little we used to call her HalPal…we don’t really use that anymore but I laugh remembering that, it was pretty cute hahaha
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊
Awwww ofccc!!!!
That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m not stealing any of that author’s ideas, I promise!!! just some of the vibes in certain s…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 4 weeks ago
But just to clarify, I don’t really ever listen to secular music. I only want to listen to music that glorifies God!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 4 weeks ago
What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)
I don’t think i…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@ESTHER-C
OMC THIS IS GONNA BE LIKE MY COMFORT BOOKI JUST KNOW IT
*curls up in a love seat with a chai latte and gingersnap with a fuzzy blanket and fuzzy socks* (those are the vibes your book gives me)
ALSO I WANT AN OLDER BROTHER SO BAD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Very interesting! I’ve nothing to say that hasn’t been said by the others. Excited to keep reading!! 😃😄
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Oh a good topic. I don’t have any tips either but I shall be sticking around. Maybe I’ll have something later. Subscribing…
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 months ago
A javelin zipped through the air, flying quickly towards its target—a tall tree in the far distance. Its sharp blade glistened in the pale sunlight, spinning slightly to keep itself moving. It collided with the tall tree, impacting with such force that it lodged itself deep into the dark wood.
A female being walked briskly to the tree. A satchel f…[Read more] - Load More