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Sara posted an update 4 months, 2 weeks ago
The link to my novel: https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
hey, I know you read the first couple chapters! I’d love to hear your thoughts/critiques on the recent chapters if you have any! But if you’re busy I totally get it, summer can be soooo hectic!
Instead of digging through all these posts, you can use this link to view the whole novel (what I’ve revised so…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Do you have any other thoughts on the chapters you’ve read?
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Sara and TheShadow are now friends 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Chapter 12
A Law
The sight that greeted Lilitu was like a cold slap in the face.
In front of the church stood three Pythonos, each with a dark horse by their side.
Jraldath, Selena, and Rrath.
A chill went down Lilitu’s spine. Unfortunately, the trio’s reputation preceded them—and it was covered with the blood of innocent victims.
The bells…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Why do you always have the BEST memes?!?! Those are great XD
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Sara replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Girlll for a second I was scared you were gonna talk about my story and I was scared XD
yeah that’s hard.
I would just encourage her to talk to her parents about it. Maybe just gently talk to her about your concerns? She might (and will probably) get defensive, but still it’s worth a shot if you care about her that much.
I’m not…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah I’ll think about doing something like that.
Again, sorry if that scene made you uncomfortable (or anyone else!)! <3
And thanks for reading my stuff!
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Aww that scene was sooo cute! <3
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
*exhales*
I just read that scene you shared. Literally, Jonathan has me so stressed right now!! That was so intense! What was he thinking!!?? DUDE! 😑
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Okay… now… ahem. 😅
I, too, like the 7th cover. My second favorite is 4, though…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
No no no! You didn’t offend me! I just felt bad for posting it XD
And you’re good I wasn’t upset or offended at all…I just you know, felt bad, and I’m sorry if that scene made you uncomfortable :/
I’m just saying that if I had picked up your fully written, published book and read it through, I might’ve felt a little iffy about the…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you for reading them!!!!!!!!!!!!! That means a lot <3
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Sara replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I think I’m going to keep it the same for now, and then change it if I feel like it XD
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
you need people to believe in you, even if you can’t sometimes. I have low self-esteem sometimes and I need my mom to put me back on track. If we tell ourselves we are worth nothing, that’s going to have mental consequences later down the road.
Yes yes yes! That’s exactly what I was going for!
As someone who completely relates to Sef…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@anyone
Chapter 11
Wolves
“Sef?”
Sef looked up from sweeping the floor, and saw Neveah standing in the doorway.
“What is it?”
“We’re forgetting something,” Neveah smiled wryly.
“Forgetting something?” Sef repeated, confused.
“Yes. We’re forgetting to think of names for the child.”
A knot of anger grew in Sef’s stomach.
“We’re going to…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
This phrasing sounds a bit awkward.
I’m cringing…
WHYYY
apparently I didn’t edit it as well as I thought…
Ooops yeah I’ll fix that.
That’s a lot of “that”s.
NOOOO I’M CRINGING AGAIN
what was I thinking?!? I just committed a crime…to use the same word three times in a sentence…how could I?!?!
By this point, you’ve managed to conv…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks that makes me feel a little better!
And I know it’s weird that I’m only 14 and are writing about this kind of stuff…
And what’s even more strange is that I was never ever exposed to violence or horror movies or bad books as a young child. So at eight years old when I started writing about slavery and…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Y’all…I have to hurry up and post the next chapters so you don’t think I’m just a psychopath teenager…
heh..heh…
Chapter 9
Strange Magic
Lilitu stood at the edge of Farnbron Brook, trying—and failing— not to gag.
The smell was especially bad tonight.
It was always worse during the warmer months, and now it was the middle of sum…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
If you don’t mind me asking, are you over 16??
Ummmmmm
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I’m 14 and don’t turn 15 until September…
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I hope I’m correct in assuming that the book will be 16+ as well because oof……that may be the darkest thing I’ve ever seen on this site……
I don’t think I’m going to have it be 16+, more like 14+ since that’s how ol…[Read more]
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@acancello
Slight problem…
So you know the fake Pinterest account I made?
I forgot the password and can’t get back in…
So can you just follow me with this link so we can message each other??? PLEASE
https://pin.it/3ulr7M3GF
I’m sorry girl XD I tried but I’m that forgetful…XD XD
@acancello
PLEASSSSE follow me cuz I really want to keep in touch! (so if you see this please don’t ignore it hahaha)