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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
“I’ll just be thankful when I can sleep in a bed again and have a roof over my head,” Etta whispered back. I mentally chided myself for longing for something so vain when even the most
practical needs still weren’t met. Etta had a wisdom I lacked. What did it matter if we were a little dirty and dusty? No one else in our party m…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I’m so excited, lol!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Who wants to start? I’ve never done this before, so anyone more experienced want to start?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @mineralizedwriting @trailblazer @freedomwriter76
Soo…. When do we begin?
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-GRCR- posted an update 3 years ago
@anyone
Question of the day: What is something you’ve always wanted to do but haven’t tried yet? -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
what do you mean by a list of names and consonants?
Do you mean names of characters?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Thank you! Yes, I do like the name and it seemed to fit her character! That’s funny that you have a sister named Neveah! haha
Interesting, so in that case, what would have allowed a universal language to come about? A grand unification? Maybe just a tongue similar to what is happing with English that simply became more…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Hey there!
I know this is kinda late, but I’ve read the prologue and the first five chapters. It’s really interesting so far, and I’m pretty excited to keep reading as you share more!
(BTW, Do you like the name Nevaeh? I have a sister with that name, so that was kinda funny to see. lol)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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-GRCR- posted an update 3 years ago
@anyone
Here is the question of today: What fictional character do you most relate to? -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
That would be fun!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Great! What language would it be? Would you want a universal Andromedan tongue, or something for each of the groups, or even something else entirely?
Just a universal Andromedan language and some magic words.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@acancello @savannah_grace2009
I think it should be Victorian and in France and all. That would be awesome!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Of course you can join!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Should we do a traditional… Victorian themed masquerade ball? And where should it take place? France?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Makes sense. Though that leaves me with some questions about the first chapter still. Why give Jordan and his wife such a beginning? Despite making it obvious that they are evil, you’ve humanized them by giving them a dying child, and having them feel grief. Also, why did you project Kratos in a negative light almost directly, w…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
hopefully Kari and Ottoline will be friends! They have some things in common!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
This is about to be fun!
…It does seem like we need more female characters though…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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