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@jonas

Very interesting! I’ll have to go read the magic systems post… because I haven’t yet…

Hey guys… for some reason I can’t see the most recent posts….

@thearcaneaxiom

Wait…you don’t believe in the trinity?

@jonas

cool!

@jonas

it’s okay! I’ve done that with your tag too lol.

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

btw guys it’s really cool that you’re siblings and both love writing! My sister hates reading and only writes when forced to (she’s eleven), and my brother only writes because he sees me write, but that’s only every couple years or so (he’s seven years old)

I had to teach myself how to write and can’t really talk…[Read more]

@jonas

Me like. Me like lots.

Same! My favorite is Krenna. It’s really cool how she can split her consciousness!

@trailblazer

I love it! Charley annoys me, lol (I’m guessing that’s the point!)

@trailblazer

I love the story! I agree with @hybridlore that it wasn’t too summary-y but it would be nice to see how the interaction with Lillian Sara and Jennie went.

I love the dancing scene! I love Libbie and Albert, they’re so cute together! (It’s fine if that’s not what you’re going for but I just like “shipping” people in my stories and…[Read more]

@trailblazer @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr

Ottoline

She sighed with relief as Lane looked away from her scars and turned his attention to the girl in the doorway. But she knew it was only a matter of time before they would get brought up.

“Oh, no, it’s not my statue, or my house even…” the bewildered girl…[Read more]

UGH! I did not mean “accessing”. I meant “assessing”

Ugh… It takes me forever to type mine.

@trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings

Great! 😆

Lane

Lane looked at Ottoline, accessing what kind of person she was. His eyes fell on her scars, and it reminded him of one of his friends back where he lived. His face vividly displayed a desire to ask about the scars, but he changed his…[Read more]

@grcr I love it!!!

Ottoline

“Do not worry,” Amir turned his warm eyes to the trembling boy. “She only shoots deer. Lucky for you.” Lane nodded.

“It’s not my statue,” Ottoline scoffed, rolling her eyes. “I couldn’t care less if you broke it or not.” Lane sighed with relief, brushing the hair out of his eyes.

“Just do not scare her, or she might…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings

Got it, lol!

Lane

He listened silently as the two people exchanged a few words.

I should probably find out where I am…

Lane shivered before he stepped inside the building. He slowly walked to a small statue in the corner of the room. He reached…[Read more]

@grcr

yep! lol

@savannah_grace2009

(I take it Lane has crashed the statue?)

@grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Ottoline

She stepped inside the building, and stopped dead in her tracks.

“What is this place?” she asked in awe. Brightly colored streamers fluttered from the ceiling, multicolored lights lit up the room, and the stone floor shone. A strange kind of music filled the room. She…[Read more]