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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
But there’s a problem there. When we chose to live in sin, or even directly comit evil, there is still hope for us until death. Even the vilest of sinner can be redeemed by the blood of Christ. If you make Pythonos unredeemable, you are almost saying that the blood of Christ is not enough for them. You know? Which is why r…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Pythonos could become loyal to the Great One again…but why would they want to? They lose all ability to love or care or feel regret and are consumed by evil and the desire for power. I just don’t know how that could work without digging a hole for myself XD
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
But Cass becomes a Pythonos, so there’s no redemption. At least, i can’t think of a way that he could be redeemed.
(See post above where I replied to Jonas)
NO I AM NOT KILLING ELOY NO NO NO I love him too much ahhh
Also…Cass doesn’t just get tortured.
He HELPS TORTURE THEM. So that won’t really work…
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
BUT ONCE HE CONVERTS HER SHE’LL REALIZE SHE LOVES HIM I KNOW IT
and yes I know Sabina will come to her senses eventually!
I won’t lose hope. XD
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I said it was a couple posts back….XD XD I thought it was clear 😬😂😂
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Lilitu was kind of my “you’re never too far gone” person, because his parents are Jraldath and Selena! There’s going to be this epic confrontation scene where he wrestles with the knowledge that he was meant to be evil from the moment he was born. Does that work? Or do I still need Cassian?
Because that’s a good idea, but I feel like…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
it’s right above where HighScribe says “no spoilers” and right below the post where you said this:
I don’t think this was on your radar when Cass was first introduced, and in several of the early chapters. (am i right?) so, you need to show a little bit of that in him. just a teeny bit. Maybe he can’t stand it if one of hios bro…
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
*gasp* THAT WAY AARON AND TURIN COULD BE BROTHERS FOR REALZ
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
yesss! Idk I just love her sooo much!
I am also shipping her and Aaron so if they don’t kiss at ALL during the whole book I will be sorely disappointed :/
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Also have you seen Sef and Lilitu’s character arcs I posted a couple posts back? I tagged Whaley but I’d love to hear your thoughts too!!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Ohhhh okay makes sense!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
That’s fair lol
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
thanks!!! I’ve been having a lot of deep thoughts lately XD lol
I don’t think this was on your radar when Cass was first introduced, and in several of the early chapters. (am i right?) so, you need to show a little bit of that in him. just a teeny bit. Maybe he can’t stand it if one of hios brothers is better at him in som…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Sooo
I think I have an idea for Lilitu’s internal conflict!
I’ve been plotting a lot today, if you couldn’t tell 😂
Sef is self depricating, like you said. She’s more like “I’m stupid. I’m worthless. I’m not worthy of love.”
What I did is prayed before developing characters today and asked God to show me verses to base the…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m just waiting for you to go to my WIP page and freak out XD XD
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I don’t see either, to be honest XD
I see myself in her. I love her personality and…idk, I just want to give her a hug, the poor girl 😭💔💗💗
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I love these scenes! You’re very talented, and I can see you have a passion for sharing Jesus through your writing! Keep it up!
Sabina is my favorite! 💗 (I also love her name)
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@everyone
Okay.
For those of you sad and mad about Cass….
I have some spoilers.
So if you hate spoilers, LOOK AWAY
I’ve been brainstorming a lot about Cass’s character, and I have come to a decision.
Cass is a perfect example of how even strong Christians give up, how someone who appears to be a superchristian can fall and crumble under…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
No that’s not overwhelming me!!! <3
Actually that makes a lot of sense.
I have to think about that XD XD (and pray about it too!) because that would work really well!!!
Aww thanks for asking!
If you look at the Prayer Requests topic I posted about how I’m doing (sorry I’m tired and don’t feel like retyping all that lol)
But…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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