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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww…Lukas has a crush! <333 (so does Liv…lol)
Livia
“Are you sure? You can tell me anything,” Liv smiled back.
(Sorry I didn’t know what else to have her say, lol)
Sef
She didn’t know where she was. All she knew was that she wanted to leave.
All around her people were dancing in pairs.
“Excuse me, miss,” a woman…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
AAAHHHHH!!!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
WE DID IT!!!WE DID IT!!!WE DID IT!!!WE DID IT!!!WE DID IT!!!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
We did it!!!!!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Were there! I guess we need 13….
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Beth-torres got off…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I’m here….I’ve been excited all day XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ummm…OF COURSE!!! I THOUGHT YOU’D NEVER ASK!!! lol
Should I have her randomly appear in the dance class and be paired with Chase since he’s not dancing with anyone?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I know Abbie Emmons on YouTube loves the three act story structure, so if you want to explore that a little more, I suggest checking out her videos. Especially the one just about the inciting incident. I think she does a pretty good job of explaining it. 😉
I will check it out!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Girlllll I love your writing so much!! (it almost always makes me tear up but I love it!!!!!)
Does it seem boring?
NOOOO! Definitely not! I was so into it, and I could see everything in my mind!How is the pace?
Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?
A little, I can tell that Riker struggles with guilt and L…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
hey yeah… maybe we should tag some people….
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hanako will get on in a few seconds (or minutes)…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Tysm for your help and encouragement!! Every single time someone tells me something they loved about my story it makes me smile 🙂
At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make somebody have that many issues unless she was also sick, and the buildup made me think her sickness was going to tie into the greater story i…
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ack, Mom just said dinner when were ready so I might not be on at 5
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, we eat really early.😅
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Were already so close!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Im also EST and 5 is usually around our dinner time. Hopefully I can make it…
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
“Hey Dad, will you buy me a flame thrower?
Of course not. Don’t be silly.
Even if I didn’t use it in the house?”
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Hey!! How does it feel to be done with your NOVEL????
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Great! A little bit weird though, I have been doing it for nearly a year. Now I’m just rewriting scenes I dont like, filling in the blanks which is really fun! Hows your writing?
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My writing’s going pretty good, I’ve been doing some major work on the first couple chapters, just making the prose better and making descriptions more vivid…I just really love that first chapter (the one I shared on the Chat Chat) for some reason…XD
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I do to! Its so realistic and sweet.
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If you want to, I really dont know what to think of this scene I wrote. I feel like I can do more with it, any points would be appreciated 😀
(I warn you, Its a little tense)
All the air seemed to drain out of my lungs. My limbs went limp with fear and I could barely register the clouds and dark sky that were around me.
This was it, this was…[Read more]-
Oops forgot your tag @savannah_grace2009
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I love it sooooooo much!!! LIBBIE HURRY UP AND SAY YOU’LL MARRY HIM!!!! AHHHH!! lol!
#LALBERT
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