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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic How to Create Good Conflict in the forum Plotting 10 years, 6 months ago
Um… well… stop the bad guys, stop the bad guys, and… stop the bad guys. 😛 They all pretty much boil down to the same thing.
And I don’t think that’s necessarily a bad thing, @gretald.
Let me explain. Though the story goal can certainly be very cool and epic and all that, it’s not the goal that makes the story interesting. It’s the…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy. Help. Ok, so I’ve kinda overcome writer’s block. I can think of lots of good ideas, but I can’t get the words to flow. Any suggestions?
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BlueJay's profile was updated 10 years, 6 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Come on @everyone. Don’t stop now. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
“Oh,” I said. I hadn’t meant to hurt him. “Well, we can be good friends now, right?”
He nods and looks at me.
“Um, anything else I should know?” My head was hurting and I rub my temples.
“Oh boy,” said Gavin. “You really have forgotten everything. Perhaps I had better come in and explain it to you so you understand what is going on.”
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BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
“Oh,” I said. I hadn’t meant to hurt him. “Well, we can be good friends now, right?”
He nods and looks at me.
“Um, anything else I should know?” My head was hurting and I rub my temples.
“Oh boy,” said Gavin. “You really have forgotten everything. Perhaps I had better come in and explain it to you so you understand what is going on.”
“Sure,” I…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
@overcomer I like this one definitely out of your lot of titles. “Marks of a Typewriter.” But “Dust and Ink” is good too. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
@overcomer I like this one definitely out your lot of titles. Marks of a Typewriter. But Dust and Ink is good too. 🙂
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Greta posted an update 10 years, 6 months ago
Jesus, Jesus,
You saved me from death.
Why? Why me?
I’m sinful.
I’m broken.
I’m awful.
I make the wrong choices.
There is no good in me.
But still you love me!
But still you pursue me!
You took the cross,
You carried it for the world.
You were tortured,
Humiliated,
For the world,
For me.
Then you rose,
Victorious,
From the grave,
You came alive…[Read more] -
Greta posted an update 10 years, 6 months ago
@everyone, Happy Good Friday! I mean, it’s not really happy, but anyway…
I’m watching the Passion of the Christ tonight to remind myself that today is more than just another day. -
Greta replied to the topic How to Create Good Conflict in the forum Plotting 10 years, 6 months ago
The conflict is in reaching the goal, not the goal itself.
@kate-flournoy, yeah, that’s what I was trying to say, but you said it better. 😉 😛
Yes, character conflict is quite interesting. In the novel I’m working on with my sister (@ingridrd), we use some of that (MC and a snobby girl [aka Sheryn Slade] are always at each other’s throats).…[Read more] -
Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
“This is really weird, introducing myself to you. Okay,” he sucks in a deep breath. “I’m Gavin Frensky.”
Gavin Frensky. The name sounds familiar…like someone I dreamed about but whom I didn’t know personally. I stare at Gavin, unable to tear my gaze away. “How old are you, Gavin?”
“I’m 17.”
Seventeen. For some reason, seventeen doesn’t seem…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic How to Create Good Conflict in the forum Plotting 10 years, 6 months ago
Hello, @gretald! I found this volcano on here just waiting to happen… awesome topic! One of my favorite tactics for conflict is sparring between characters. Yeah, we have the overall conflict (which is the story-goal) but it really helps move things along if you have a lot of heated exchanges between the characters on a scene to scene basis. If…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
:O Sarah!!! So this is the kind of friend that I’m emailing with?!? *Faints* 😛
@overcomer I do love the beach. You make me wish for summer all again. We are into our first month of autumn and heading for winter. 🙁 (And my birthday 🙂 )
@kate-flournoy A wise move. I shall endeavour to do the same. -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
I shall remain silent. *zips lips* 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Gosh, @spradlin, how devious!!! 😛 😉
I would love it if you’d post it here, @overcomer. 😀 Seriously.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Gosh, @spradlin, how devious!!! 😛 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Hm… ‘Dust and Ink’? ‘Endurance’? ‘An Inky Legacy’? ‘Forever’?
Love the quick, tight rhythm, by the way! I honestly can’t find anything I would change. Nice and simple, but pithy at the same time. Love it. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
Written Words.
Ha, I thought of another one. Yay! (Don’t know if it’s any good though.) -
BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
@overcomer Ooooo….great poem. I really loved it.
Hmm…titles. Not my strong point.
The typewriter.
Words.
“Come on Tess. Think, think.” *scrunches up eyes and holds breath* Gasp, gasp, gasp. “Nope, that’s all I can think of for now.” 🙁 Sorry - Load More
