Masyn

I’m like wow. This is over. That’s awesome. That’s terrible. Wait, it’s not over. I’ll probably be editing for months now.

Hahaha @Daeus that was exactly my reaction when I finished my latest. 😀

Wow, so you like plotting? That’s an enormous plus… I’m kinda bad at that myself. Characters are definitely the highlight for me. And daydreami…[Read more]

@Daeus Awesome!!! Congratulations! That is quite an accomplishment. 😀

@Daeus CONGRATULATIONS!!!! *throws rainbow-colored confetti, screams with excitement*
I know that thrill very well. 😀

Careful. You might turn into a frozen raspberry yourself if you eat that much.

So what did you most enjoy about this experience— your first full novel, wasn’t it?

@Daeus I going to stop for now. I got 572 words of a new short story written. Thanks for writing with me! 🙂

@Daeus I going to stop for now. I got 579 words of a new short story written. Thanks for writing with me! 🙂

@Daeus I’ll join you for a bit…say, until 2:30?

@kate-flournoy Yes, I agree with this so much. {Or, as @spradlin would say “gives many thumbs up.” 😉 } Great point about the smallest personality traits affecting the character’s decisions.

I’m back @daeus *waves eagerly* I didn’t get as much writing as I had wanted to, but I got some stuff down on paper. I’m unsure how many words as I was using a pen and I’m not about to count. 😛

This is AWESOME. You guys have done so much since I was gone. It’s looking great. *Stares into the distance and dreams of mango*
@daeus @faithdk @kate-flournoy

@Daeus humph. 😀

@Daeus, thanks so much for critiquing it! 🙂

Thanks for reading and critiquing it, @kate-flournoy! 🙂

Yes @gretald, much better! 😀 I’m getting a lot more imagery this time around, not just a vague sense of what happened. Good work!

All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…

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All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…

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@Daeus oh! Now I get it— very clever. 😀

No, really.

My fault I didn’t get it at first. 😉 My head must be screwed on front-ways for once, making my brain very sluggish. *chuckles*

@Daeus oh! Now I get it— very clever. 😀

No, really.

My fault I didn’t get it. 😉 My head must be screwed on front-ways for once, making my brain very sluggish. *chuckles*

@Daeus… what?