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@anne-swiftblade, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Sweet Sixteen, too! Hope your day is awesome! 😀

@sarah-h I joined you for about 10 minutes (if you were still writing) I am working on another poem. Have to run now. Bye. *leaves*

@sarah-h I don’t know if I’m too late, but I can go for 15 minutes. *starts* (and thanks 🙂 )

@ClaireC
I love this topic idea!

@Sarah-h
I’ll definitely pray. Learning languages is hard, especially when you’re trying to learn them quickly. Speaking and listening to native speakers is the hardest part, but with God, anything is possible. 😉

@Claire-C
I love this topic idea!

@Sarah-h
I’ll definitely pray. Learning languages is hard, especially when you’re trying to learn them quickly. Speaking and listening to native speakers is the hardest part, but with God, anything is possible. 😉

@anne-of-lothlorien
Again, I’m late…but WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN!!! I recognize you from Hope’s blog (I’m gretald on there). 😉
Yesssss! I love your book choices! Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, and The Mysterious Benedict Society are some of my favorites. 🙂

@clairec Thanks. 🙂 It is a little bit hard to read, so I’m think of changing it, but I’m not sure what too. *surprise*

@sarah-h Thanks. Maybe I’ll be brave…@daeus can you come and have a look at this poem? What do you think? Any critiques?

@sarah-h I will be praying. And that’s wonderful. The Lord is so faithful. 🙂

@sarah-h *crashes through door and gives you a good night hug.* 🙂 *gasps for joy* We were writing together!!??!! YES!!! *jumps for joy* *sneaks out of room quietly* 🙂 🙂 🙂

@ClaireC with pleasure. 🙂

@Claire-C with pleasure. 🙂

Anne!!!! You came to KP!!! Oh my goodness why did you have to do it while I was on vacation I haven’t properly welcomed you and this is terrible oh dear!!
So first of all— WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN, @ANNE-OF-LOTHLORIEN!!

Yes. So now that that’s out of the way… I really like your poem. I agree with the comments about the rhythm— it does seem to…[Read more]

Ooh, such a lovely topic! @Mark-Kamibaya thanks for starting it. I missed it initially because I’m on vacation and wifi is spotty, but you may rest assured I have not abandoned the forum. 😉
As for my favorite structure/arc… well, it really depends. I don’t think I have an absolute favorite. The two I primarily use are Hero’s Journey and…[Read more]

Psst @sarah-h Here’s the poem for the third list. Please feel free to critique. (just technically I think I did a terrible job, but….)

One day when I was gregarious,
And we were all being very rampageous,
An indigenous to Australia stood and said,
“I think that we are being loutish,
Or extremely ostentatious.
Perhaps we should be quiet
And b…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper It will be @daeus
@daeus I’m leaving now. Good-bye. I got a poem written, only I don’t think it’s very good, but never mind. *waves farewell*