@mark-kamibaya
Active 8 years ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@rolena-hatfield That’s great! It’s really cute. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Looking For Critique Of Realistic Middle-Grade Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@raevynstar I must decline (way too much going on 😉 ), but I hope you get the help you need.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@raevynstar Cool. 🙂 I’m in Southern Ohio.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
*scowls at technology in general* Sorry guys… if any of you have followed the link and been horribly confused, I tried to fix something backstage because one of my pages was acting up and I think I just made it worse. I’ll try to get it back up and organized as soon as possible.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@rolena-hatfield wellll… *glances around cautiously*
Okay, yes. Apparently my secret is out. I do have a blog. I’ve had it for a while; I just haven’t been able to be active on it yet. I went ahead and set it up for graphic design purposes, but I’m waiting to finish up the very lastest of my last extracurricular school projects before I start…[Read more] -
Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@emily Thank you! I’m very fond of attics myself 🙂
@lifeofkatie @seekjustice Yay! More bloggers coming out of the shadows! I will check them out!
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@josiahdeboer There is no shame in sharing. In fact you just led the way for others to shamelessly share.
@kate-flournoy @lifeofkatie @dragon-snapper @seekjustice Anybody else have a blog? 🙂
And anyone else who has a blog that we don’t know about, should say something here.
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Snapper replied to the topic Is My Main Character Well-Developed? in the forum Characters 9 years ago
@raevynstar Oh…yeah….that would make a Labrador a problem. 😛
@daeus *dances* Yay! Destruction to telling!
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Snapper replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@daeus
Well, big thoughts is mainly that you should take out the last paragraph, because although you’re trying to appeal with struggles like that, people might not want to think of themselves as weak or cowardly, if you know what I mean. Maybe they know that subconsciously, but who wants to admit that they are a coward? I mean, a Christian might…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@jess-penrose We call them both.
@josiahdeboer You don’t need to have read the book. Just tell me your gut feelings. Most people, after all, do read a synopsis before they read the book.
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Daeus replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@everybody Thanks for the feedback! I suppose I’ll tweak some of the wording then get back to you.
@dragon-snapper Both, of course. 🙂
@xonos-darkgrate There are some plot twists, yes, but the story doesn’t stand on its unusual premise. It stands much more on its psychological depth. And, certainly! Go ahead and reword it.
@emily Anything…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@jess-penrose XD Yeah, that’s my thoughts. 😀 You might have noticed I have very strong opinions on these things. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper *scowls* We are not taking over the kingdom.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@xonos-darkgrate as someone who has read and reread this story, I can assure you it’s anything but simple. In many ways it’s a lot like most classical literature— the premise it’s built on is very basic, almost simple, and yet when you read the story it’s nothing you ever would have guessed.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@rolena-hatfield I love your blog! Your Attic looks so nice!
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Snapper replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@kate-flournoy He forgot to tag me too. Can we take over the kingdom now? How bout now? Now?
@daeus Well…do you want my big thoughts or little thoughts? -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus *sniffs* You forgot to tag me.
But looks like I’m first to the party anyway, so here goes. XDFirst off, I really like it. The only suggestions I have are a few tweaks to the wording.
The first line, I think, would be better as simply ‘Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister are now…’ etc. It leaves out…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
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Daeus started the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
Hi KeePers,
I’m trying to nail down the synopsis for my time travel novel Fools In The Darkness. If you have a moment, I’d really appreciate your help. Here’s what I have so far.
Trevor is in a mess after traveling back in time
Not only has he abandoned his friend to die, but he and his sister are now stuck in medieval England where a mad…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@raevynstar Welcome to KP! Where do you live?
Yes, humans. Those are the biggest monsters possible for a good story!
That is a huge truth. Humans will ALWAYS be more interesting to read about than any kind of creature. Whether they’re good or bad. 😛
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