@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy Ah, good. The sword and axe was the main thing I wanted an opinion on. Also, it just came to my mind that the name might actually look better a little larger. I normally like them small, but I feel like a small increase would give it a more balanced feel. You think that’s right?
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
So here’s a question, I showed the cover to my mom and she got quite a different impression than I did. I felt like it gave the story a more historical action feel, whereas she thought it gave the cover a cheap murder story feel. She also thought the guy was holding some sort of sword or gun in his hand (that’s what she mistook the flames licking…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
*screams* @Hope you deserted me!
Oh wait, I can do this. Yeah. I’m fine. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus I love it. Nothing really to complain of that I can see. I do think the picture of the man is a little fuzzy, but that may be just the distraction of all the watermarks and such on the cover. I love the crossed axe and sword. Overall, I find it very eye-catching and engaging.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
Never mind. I will leave you in @kate-flournoy‘s capable hands.
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
Ok, watcha think of this?

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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy Thanks for the input. Do you think the capitals are just too big, or do you think they are too fancy — or both. Also, do you agree that the font seems to come down too close to his head?
I get unlimited revisions, but there’s a time limit. I think it’s normally about a week you have, but it’s been a bit different for me. My…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
I like it. I love how the words flow. And thank you, @kate-flournoy. I shall give you a glowing recommendation whenever you need it. 😉
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus I really like this. 🙂 It makes me want to read it. I think having your name at the bottom would be better. Compared to your last drafts this is really fantastic. I especially like the writing in the background, which gives it that perfect mysterious and historical feel. I can’t wait to see the final version.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus heyyyy, I actually really like that. There’s a lot more for the brain to process there; it’s vastly more interesting. The only thing I can think might help with setting the genre a bit more obviously is a sword somewhere in the design… it doesn’t have to be in the actual picture, but maybe in the border… just a sword-shape. You could…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @mark-kamabaya @jess @hope @his-instrument @dragon-snapper @anyone-else.
Hey, y’all. I’m back with another cover here. I think my designer either misunderstood me or missed some of my changes, so it’s a bit different than what I was planning, but it ended up being pretty cool in my opinion. I get the feel that it’s…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic A Name For Rodyn in the forum Characters 9 years, 8 months ago
@ethryndal Huzzah! I win! 😛 😉 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Daughter Of Eve saying "Hi"! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@S-G-Dewey
Yay! Another new person! A Narnia and a LotR person? Yay! I myself am more a LotR universe person, but Narnia is still awesome! I am one of those dragons which @ethryndal mentioned. I am the melter…of chairs. I don’t melt people. So don’t worry. 😛
Welcome to the BESTESTIST MOST AMAZINGIEST AND FANTASGREATIEST place. At least,…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Daughter Of Eve saying "Hi"! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@S.G.Dewey
Yay! Another new person! A Narnia and a LotR person? Yay! I myself am more a LotR universe person, but Narnia is still awesome! I am one of those dragons which @ethryndal mentioned. I am the melter…of chairs. I don’t melt people. So don’t worry. 😛
Welcome to the BESTESTIST MOST AMAZINGIEST AND FANTASGREATIEST place. At least,…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Daughter Of Eve saying "Hi"! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@s.g.dewey
Yay! Another new person! A Narnia and a LotR person? Yay! I myself am more a LotR universe person, but Narnia is still awesome! I am one of those dragons which @ethryndal mentioned. I am the melter…of chairs. I don’t melt people. So don’t worry. 😛
Welcome to the BESTESTIST MOST AMAZINGIEST AND FANTASGREATIEST place. At least,…[Read more] -
Christine Eaton replied to the topic Daughter Of Eve saying "Hi"! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@S-G-Dewey, Well, I would not say that I am an adventurer, but if could manage to get myself back East to various places such as Georgia, Tennessee, South Carolina, and Virginia, (especially Virginia) I would be quite content. But many of my friendships are long distance and air fare from California is not cheap 🙂 but that is the way life is I’m afraid.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Memories and What They Look Like in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@Winter-Rose Just a thought here, but what about weather? Happy memories radiate light, angry memories are stormy, sad memories seem wet and rainy, confused memories foggy, memories of love all glowy and warm.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Daughter Of Eve saying "Hi"! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
Welcome, @S-G-Dewey! I was about to ask if you were a human, elf, or dragon, but then I actually read the title of this thread. 🙂 Daughter of Eve. I got this. I myself am an elf, and I believe we have a few dragons slinking around in the shadows. But don’t worry, they try not to melt people. Most of the time. 😉
New Zealand, Iceland, and the UK.…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A Name For Rodyn in the forum Characters 9 years, 8 months ago
Ah, okay, good. Sorry, people. Moment of indecision has passed. I have them quite often. Thanks for bearing with me. 🙂 Silver Flame it is.
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