Mark Kamibaya

@That_writer_girl_99 *jumps in late AGAIN to respond to something that happened four pages ago* Yup, Sarcastic Elf. That’s me. Summed up and wrapped in glittery perfection in two incredibly awesome words. *bows*

@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD

Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! How about you make mention that Jack had woken Daniel up or something? Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD

Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering which brother is the MC.

“Thieves?”
“No.” It couldn’t be that. The…

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@ethryndal *laughs* Touché!

@dragon-snapper That’s so exciting that you’re entering a contest!
I liked taking this little adventure with Daniel and Jack. Your descriptions are clever 🙂

The one part I was confused by…

“For a while, I trekked about the house with a whisper of guilt trickling into my head. However, I knew that if there was indeed a problem,…”

I guess…[Read more]

@perfectfifths *falls off chair and chokes laughing* I’m an elf, okay? This Galaxy stuff is beyond me.

@stewie-plotter Questions…

150 Coins: 10% off KP merch product (non-stackable)
150 Coins: 5% off KP merch order (non-stackable)
250 Coins: 10% off KP merch order (non-stackable

this part doesn’t make sense. Why would we get ten percent off or five percent off, and then ten percent off if we make it up to 250 coins. Also, not to complain or…[Read more]

@ethryndal It sounds like a little six-year-old Padawan with a lithp! 😀

@Dragon-snapper The only writing contest I ever knew about was Patrick Henry College’s “A Call to Pens”, but they’re not doing it this year, so…sorry. I know I’m not helpful.

@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks for the tag!

@Lady_Erin Yeah, sorry, I’m one of the few weird people here whose username doesn’t match their profile name. =P If you go to someone’s profile by clicking their name, you’ll be able to see what their username is. It takes a bit, but you’ll get used to who has different username/profile name combinations…[Read more]

*snickers* I am one with the 4th, the 4th is with me. May the 4th be with you all!!!

@anne-of-lothlorien Western Australia 😀 We’re at least 12 hours ahead of the U.S. depending on the timezone and stuff.

@bethanysinkyroses “Or you know, my dear,” Anne bows and grins, “I believe I could direct you if you close your eyes? The library way is slightly longer. Follow these instructions to the letter. Take two and a half small steps forward, spin around once, go down four steps… and here you are!”
Anne bows Bethany, her eyes twinkling. “It’s a bit…[Read more]

@perfectfifths Where do you live?

@dragon-snapper May the 4th be with you, too, but for me, it is now Revenge of the 5th 😀

May the fourth be with you all, young Padawins. Use the force, size matters not, do or do not there is no try, blah blah blah and all that good Jedi stuff. @daeus @kate-flournoy @audrey-caylin @that_writer_girl_99 @allStarWarsfans.

Well, first of at, @dragon-snapper, I have to warn you, you have tagged one of the most picky proof-readers/editors I know – me! So, yeah, it’s only because I want to help make your work the bestistest you can make it. Forewarning, now for some edits 😉

“Daniel!” My brother, Jack exclaimed, just as perplexed. Make the ;m’ in ‘my’ lowercase – tha…[Read more]

Well, first of at, @dragon-snapper, I have to warn you, you have tagged one of the most picky proof-readers/editors I know – me! So, yeah, it’s only because I want to help make your work the bestistest you can make it. Forewarning, now for some edits 😉

“Daniel!” My brother, Jack exclaimed, just as perplexed. Make the ;m’ in ‘my’ lowercase – tha…[Read more]

Happy Star Wars day, everyone! May the 4th be with you!
@perfectfifths @daeus @kate-flournoy @all of the star wars fans!

*shakes head* You guys… XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 YAY!!! *tackles you and smothers you in blankets and pillows* We knew you could do it! Way to go! *fuscia confetti*