@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses I agree. I tend to have to learn things myself before I get them. *sigh*
That’s a neat insight. I need to read 1 Peter again.
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Daeus replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses I’m a strong believer that a skilled writer can make almost anything exciting. You do need conflict to create an interesting story, but conflict doesn’t have to be what you might think it is. Conflict is not actually the same as people fighting (verbally or physically). I’ve encountered plenty of physical or other forms of…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
What are you studying in the bible right now?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter-Rose poor guy… *hugs him* Seriously though, you did great. First person pov is not one of my strong points and can be very easy to do typically, but you did great with it. Thanks for sharing. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter-Rose My heart aches for poor Sam. *groan* Poor, poor guy. XD
That was great. His POV!
I did catch several thingies, mostly punctuation errors, while I was reading through; if you want me to tell you them.
I wonder, did the powdered sugar incident have inspiration from real life? It seems like it would. 😛 -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter_Rose My heart aches for poor Sam. *groan* Poor, poor guy. XD
That was great. His POV!
I did catch several thingies, mostly punctuation errors, while I was reading through; if you want me to tell you them.
I wonder, did the powdered sugar incident have inspiration from real life? It seems like it would. 😛 -
Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
There are no words to express my amusement @ethryndal 😀 This will definitely go down in KeePer history.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal XD XD XD That is amazing. @Aratrea you could put that as a picture with your credentials—Josiah the Wiser, on your video series or books of advice to growing writers. 😀
Btw @Anne-of-Lothlorien, @SleepwalkingMK is an ENFP. Also, if you’re not very extroverted, how do you know you aren’t an INFP? *wiggles eyebrows* Maybe you are. :D…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus yep. 590 words, so I’m pretty happy. 🙂 Thanks yourself.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy I’m stopping now. Got two chapters edited. Thanks for writing. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy Sweet.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus writing now. I’ll be going until two o clock.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea Mayhaps I should say I’m sorry…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus about to be. I’ll tag you when I start.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy Are you writing now?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
*screams*
@Ethryndal aaauuuuggghhhh!!! I’m dying! *chokes on her laughter and topples over off her chair and goes into spasms on the floor*PERFECT. Absolutely perfect.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal Wow; I’m getting major “Russian author” vibes from that sketch, so it’s really hard for me to complain about having that look! 😛 Probably the closest to Dostoevsky I’ll ever get. 😉
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien You peaked my interest.
@Aratrea I’m sorry. 😀I present to you…Josiah the Wiser!

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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Anna-of-Lothlorien You peaked my interest.
@Aratrea I’m sorry. 😀I present to you…Josiah the Wiser!

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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl *maniacal laugh* Mwahahaha!
No…actually, I think that would just be horrible to myself, because I know what’s going to happen. I haven’t even gotten your village yet. Not yet…but soon. After I get past these butterflies. *grrr*
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