@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Now that’s just creepy.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY DID IT EITHER!!!!! I feel famous for being the inspiration behind her masterpiece.
@ethryndal Maybe I will try and put it up just to see how it compares. I’ve always been horrible at drawing guys though, I’m much better with girls.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Anne-of-lothlorien Aw, come on. You’d do great. You cannot tell me that mine doesn’t partly look like a warped Radagast.
@Aratrea I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY DID IT. Whoa. I feel…famous.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses I definitely think a story of that kind would interest people. There is a very well-known Christian book, Stepping Heavenward. I’ve never read it personally, but many people I know enjoyed it, and from my understanding, it is just the kind of book you are thinking about writing.
Conflict is hard. I have no sage advice, since I…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal It actually grows on me the more I see it. Looking like a Russian novelist has always been a partial-dream of mine. 😀
@anne-of-lothlorien This will probably just be temporary, but I’ll at least do it for a week. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal It actually grows on me the more I see it. Looking like a Russian novelist has always been a partial-dream of mine. 😉
@anne-of-lothlorien This will probably just be temporary, but I’ll at least do it for a week. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal It actually grows on me the more I see it. Looking like a Russian novelist has always been a partial-dream of mine. 😉
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hey @daeus, I think the time might have come for a new Writing Corner again… just a humble suggestion, oh king.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal I was almost tempted to try myself, but I knew there were better artists on here, and whatever I produced would probably end up looking more a warped Radagast with a bloated fish than a Russian writer with an evil frog.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses Hello! I am Anne Greenleaf of Lothlorien, The Secret Lady of London. I believe Daeus welcomed you to the bestisest place on the planet already, so he won. I’ll beat him one of these days…
@graciegirl My middle name is Elizabeth too! With a ‘z’.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Anne-of-lothlorien I’m so glad you entreated us artists to draw that—it was the most fun I’ve had in a loooong time. @aratrea, I’m sorry I had so much gleefully villainous pleasure at your expense. XD
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal… Oh. My. Goodness.
THAT IS SO PERFECT! HIS BEARD, HIS FACE, (it’s so recognizable) THE FROG… YOU EVEN GOT IT TO GRIN EVILLY!!!! This just made my day. Totally. @aratrea, you should put that as your avatar.@daeus I think I’ll plan the first launch of your take-over; I’m thinking multi-colored balloons popping out of boxes and…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Hope The evil henchman frog. 😀
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal *chokes* That… that is hysterical. I can’t believe how much the face looks like him while also looking so… off. XD And that frog. I get the impression that ‘The Wiser’ is somewhat indulgent while his frog keeps everyone in line when he isn’t looking.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea See, I’ve done you a service by drawing you as a scraggly old man. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl Propensity 😉 (though I like proness)
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Daeus replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses Ah, yes. That is what I was trying to get to.
All of this is perfectly doable, but you need to approach it from the right mindset.
What you need to understand is the difference between a wish and a goal. A goal is proactive. A wish is passive.
A wish is like this: “I really don’t want to talk to anyone on the phone.” *cries…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses Hi! So glad you could join our Kingdom! Jesus, forests, writing, family—looks like we have a lot in common. 🙂
What are some of your favorite books? (Note how merciful I am by not making you choose one. 😉 ) What genre do you primarily write in?
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